| "Female Naruto My Way:M rated version" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter. I like how Naru used her clones to figure out Kurenai's capabilities. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Title: chap 8 revive
Reviewed By: hinata-fan On: January 28, 2007 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, i thought the other teachers went ezer on there studients XD, o well, say wheres that cristmass speshal? its on the other 1 but not this 1 >..
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Title: Chapter 8 review
Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the team, especially since Kurneai and Shino accept Naru for who she is. I have to wonder how Shino will react to learning his team mates are lovers though. He'll probably have to visit some bushes to relieve some tension if he hears them making love.
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Title: Chapter 7 review
Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 16:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice clothing, but I expected the media miner version to contain a little more playing in the changing room.
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Title: Chapter 7 review
Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter, but I think Hinata could use some armor or extra padding for protection. Maybe just some knee and elbow pads to wear plus some shin guards??? I like Chris and I'd like to meet her mother also.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 05:38 CST
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I say number two, personally, as some skin shown seems most like Hinata, especially after the time lapse. On another note, I think somehting kida gothish for Hinata would be amusing, but not her style ultimately. I mean really, Hinata seems liike she'd look best in light colored clothes, like lavender or a navy blue, dark colors in the blue spectrum. But, whatever, its another interesting, perverted chapter. YOU'RE WORSE THAN ERO SENIN!!
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Title: Chapter 6 review
Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter. I look forward to seeing 'Kasumi' and Hinata shopping. I'd like to see Hinata go Semi-consertative, I think the non-conservative would be a bit much. Plus, she needs to keep some protection for missions unless they can get sexy battle gear that protects and looks good.
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Title: chapter 3.5 review
Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter, I can feel the love Naru and Hinata share easily. But Naru calling Hinata her angel has me picturing Hinata in a white leather suit with fake angel wings teasing Naru.
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Reviewed By: hinata-fan On: November 17, 2006 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
muhahaha that was awesome:P, i didnt see anything wrong like spelling and shit but i cant spell myself so.... i liked it:) u arent getting many revives here but im sure the ppl just dont feel like responding 2 times(most of the time) lol and they prob didnt look on the sit but u know keep up the good work:)
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Title: ALRIGHT!
Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 18:26 CST
Comment/Review:
i want to see this story go all the way through.
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Title: Chapter 4 review
Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Big points for having Kyuubi appear, I hope she can manifest in a more relaxed situation to act as a surrogate mother to Hinata like she does for Naru. I'd love to see what happened between Naru and Hinata as they waited to be found, please write that chapter!
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Reviewed By: hinata-fan On: November 15, 2006 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh awesome i like this one much better:P u should get hinata to do somefingering or w/e :P lol but ya, like the story u tried my way:) hope u keep it like that it was much ezer to read:P, but i'll still read if u dont:P im just an absest fan i have no other pointers:P
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter! I can't wait to see the next one on FF.net and then read the full version here!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 04:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Most excellent chapter! I enjoy seeing Naru and Hinata being so close and I can't wait until they can be affectionate in public!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story, I enjoyed it alot! I hope to see more of it and see how Naruto and Hinata's relationship developes over time!
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