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Reviewed By: AK_Kuma On: September 14, 2007 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic! Can't wait for the next chapter. Style is easy to follow, I didn't notice any misspelling or such, but i'm not the best at that anyways so take that with a grain of salt. Really nice story so far with a quick pace. Over all one of the better story ideas i've read in a long time. the others out there seem to be a rinse and repeat type, so its nice to get something completely new :)
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: notBald [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:03 CDT
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Having Ranma fall into the spring of drowned replicator is ingenious. But how can a robot drown? :P. Looking forwards to Ranma flexing her muscles in the universe. Even more to when Ranma meets up with the other replicators, or for that sake the Asgaar.
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Reviewed By: gelionlegend1 On: July 10, 2007 19:47 CDT
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i like though i would like to know where in the stargate timeline this takes place, is it before or after finding Reese? finding the internet would be good for ranma maybe start inventing new technology's using the info from the net and manga like ghost in the shell and son goku midnight eye. exploring finding knowledge and tech left behind like the ancient outpost at the poles. though i do wonder why ranma hasn't thought of making a change to his male form so he doesn't loose the abilties he has like the hyperlink with his/her drones/creations sort of like the borg queen. ranma improving his or her tech used in her body and the drones, with the internet ranma could likely connect or find a way to connect to systems that have stuff like stargate knowledge. heck he could create a human drone to hold a copy of him like in mother of storms the optimizers evolved and took on traits of those it worked with in essence a pale copy so he can send it where he can't go if you will. from what i have remembered just now it must be before finding Reese as sg1 don't say anything about human form bugs just chief bug well is that right? is there going to be any other xover or just ranma/stargate? well update soon please as i have enjoyed these two chapters so far, makes me wonder who that Calypso creature is, will ranma make tech like ships and new technology like healing devices.
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Reviewed By: Keflyn On: July 10, 2007 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this, and I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 00:30 CDT
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Hmm... This is in line with Ranma. I wonder how it will continue. You've really got me stumped. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Title: keep it up
Reviewed By: alexus-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well writen, keep it up, its good. maybe a bit fast, but it is the your story.
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Reviewed By: Tuisto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, I liked it. Not many good Ranma/Stargate cross fics. And having Ranma being a human-form replicator with her army of 'bugs' makes it all the better. Of course the problem with the pronouns is maddening. Ranma+female form = "she" not "he"
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Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 15:03 CDT
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Wow. This is turning out to be a really interesting fic! Keep up the good work! Also, which series aree you crossing with Ranma? I noticed Stargate, but is that all?
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Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I am liking your "Photocopy" series more than I thought I would when I first read chapter one. I can not wait to see the next chapter I wander what will happen when SG1 meets Ranma or when Carter finds out where the shields came from. I hope that the next chapter comes out really soon.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is great. I need more.
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Reviewed By: jetsmillion On: February 02, 2007 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't pay too much attension to the spelling an stuff, but even with my HIGHLY limited knowledge of star gate I'm really liking this fic. Please update, and PLEASE DO NOT make Ranma go "Evil" or anything
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Reviewed By: spanky_luvmonkey On: February 02, 2007 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I started to read your story called Photocopy I almost didn't recognize the replicators untill further info was provided and that I found incredibly enjoyable and also I would never have known about the Replicators if it was not for a friend of mine and his fanftical intrest in the show Stargate SG:1. I hope you are able to continue this story thread to its finish and I look forward to reading more of your literature.
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Reviewed By: notBald [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read this on FF.net, and now again at MediaMiner. Great work!
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Reviewed By: TJG On: January 23, 2007 01:37 CST
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If Ranma does sponsor annual contests, not connected with each other of course, he might want to also sell books under aliases that helps teach them up to a certain level and inspire others to come up with new ideas and encourage them to enter the competitions, which could be set up like olympics or art contests. Under his original identity, he could sell martial arts and basic ki skills with the hook being working up to throwing a ki projectile.
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Reviewed By: TJG On: January 21, 2007 14:04 CST
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One idea could be for Ranma to have several aliases and advertise being a detective, "ghost buster", demon hunter, security trouble consultant, specialized archeological investigator, and high-tech technical consultant. This could borrow ideas from "Ghost in the Shell", "Ghostbusters", "X-Files", "Goku's Mid-night Eye", etc. This would allow Ranma to investigate mystical sources and energies and "bleeding-edge" technology. He might borrow an idea from "Ghost in the Shell" where replicators are used to make remote-controlled robot bodies so he does not have to travel much himself. Ranma might also sponser annual competitions around the world in various high-tech, martial arts, and mystical contests and conferences with sharing of information that also happens to give Ranma new information to periodically assimilate. He might have some remote-controlled disguised robots to act as judges. This would allow some smaller stories among the more galactic stories. Ranma might even run into Scooby-Doo scenarios with con-men and mis-attributed events and Buffy the Vampire Slayer adventures too. "X-files" stories might also be a source of ideas, though avoiding the stories that might be too disjointed would need to be done.
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