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"The Wolf of Flowers" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ]
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 Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 03, 2008 00:11 CST
Comment/Review:
lol......Looked like it was going to be such a good fic to ....saddly it looks like you havent updated it ....sigh to bad
 Reviewed By: DeathImpalesYou  On: July 15, 2007 05:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so good so far, please update soon and keep up the good work. :)
 Title: kewl
Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 20, 2007 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oooooo me likey. keep updating plz :3 i was kinda thrown for a loop when chap2 was updated on the 23rd and the 3rd on the 4th... lol sorry about the low grammer score, but you could use a beta
 Reviewed By: blkwolf1  On: April 14, 2007 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey!!! Totally LOVE your story so far!!! PLEASE update soon!!!
 Reviewed By: Satella  On: April 10, 2007 16:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am interested in the plot, and I love this pairing so much. May I make a few criticisms though to improve your writing? I believe writing is never completely finished because a person could always revise and do better. First, try reading over and out loud your previous, and future, chapters. It's a really good way to check for spelling and grammar. Your fanfic could be even better if you fixed your misspelled words. Second, try adding more description. A better description of the setting would be awesome. For example, instead of a forest, make it a dark forest with trees that reach towards the sky, only allowing streams of light to peak through the cracks between its canopy. I was also wondering why the soldiers chose to attack Kagome so quickly. People like Quent traveled a little throughout the anime without too much of a problem. Try giving the soldiers more reason to attack without making Kagome seem like a rabid dog. Still, your fanfic was good enough to catch my eye so please post another chapter soon, and consider my suggestions.
 Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: adaregirl  On: April 09, 2007 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi, I loved your fanfiction story. My favorite show is Naruto, and I love kiba. he is just soooooooo hot. My sister's favorite show is Inuyasha. Please never put the @#$%^ Kikyo in the story thank you. adaregirl
 Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2007 11:31 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Bring her MIKO POWER'S to light plz!!!!
 Title: Shinagami Darkness
Reviewed By: Death Note Maker  On: February 03, 2007 08:39 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story so far! plz update soon!
 Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2007 20:24 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
0.0 ..... LOVE IT..........
 Reviewed By: NemoisEmo [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 08, 2007 19:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a really good fanfic!please update!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: LCAR [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2007 19:20 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Come on come on i really want to now what happens next
 Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2007 07:40 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Like it and hope you update soon ^^
 Title: Saphieralynn
Reviewed By: Saphieralynn [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2007 04:40 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW...I mean...WOW...you've done a great job can't wait to read the next chapters and see what happens hope you update soon............... CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!
 Reviewed By: demonfromhell [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 03, 2007 16:11 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY an update!! It's kinda sad that I'm the only one actually typing reviews... But oh well!!! I really like the Hige/Blue pairing, but I don't know about the others. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!! Please update as soon as possible!!!
 Reviewed By: demonfromhell [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 02, 2007 15:29 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY!! I've finally found another Wolf's Rain/InuYasha crossover! I love your story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Please update ASAP!!!
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