| "A Simple Legacy (I)" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart21 On: March 16, 2011 15:13 EDT
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I enjoyed the first part to this story very much. I think you did an amazing job of keeping everyone in character. I can't wait to see the next part! |
Reviewed By: Kynkii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2010 05:19 EDT
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Very enjoyable. A nice blend of action, mystery and humor. On to Part 2. I know it will be just as fun to read as Part 1.
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: RavenSilverKat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really good story. It was a nice change to the basic "O, Kagome has powers and I trainer her and she gave me my arm back" stories. I really loved this story and out of the want to read the real lemon when it comes, I shall not read Simply Hard (I started then stopped and I liked the first part). And now on to part II!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 17:34 EDT
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hi, this is a great story. i liked the way you had sesshomaru and kagome interact, i hope in the sequel i can find out what happened to kagome on her birthday.
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story telling. I was worried in the first chapter that this would be a redundant, boring piece, but I was pleasently surprised as the flow gained momentum the characters are developing well and the story is progressing in a believeable manner. The authors talent shows well. I anticipate an equal effort in the future parts.
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I just finished reading all of part one, and I am impressed. You remained true to the characters in the series, and didn't try to push anything too soon. I especially liked that Kagome actually learned some useful combat skills, at the hands of one of the most skilled fighters of the era, no less! Very well done! I can't wait to read the second part!
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Reviewed By: eroticanime On: May 09, 2007 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was easy to fall into the world of imagination, which is what reading is all about when it is done for enjoyment. now I am off to read your continuations!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 02:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god thats right you said this was part one noOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait when will you start part two.? Please let it be soon I loved this story and I am looking forward to the next part. *S*
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: Princess Zeldaa On: February 03, 2007 11:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely everything was just perfect! I love the way you did the charactor descriptions with such details. The charactors are beleiveable, you are doing Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship nice and slow, unlike many stories i've read where they rush it, and I like how Kagome . . . DOESN'T .... like InuYasha as much. Heh. Inuyasha is so stubborn! I would love to say what Sango/Miroku have to think/say on her new training, and coming back to the group completely. I also wonder what Sango is going to do to the stupid InuYasha pup, PLEASE make her kill him?! Joking, heh. Sorry, I just hate InuYasha [the charactor]. Overall, this is by far the best story i've read, Indeed. My favorite thing you did super well is their relationship. Thank you so much for not rushing it. Again, I wish you luck! Hope to see Part II very soon! But, i'm not rushing you!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 19:44 EST
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Fantastic!! I absolutely loved the whole thing, and I can't wait for Part II. The plot was interesting, the characters were believable, the interaction and evolving relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru was so well-done -- this is a terrific story! What will happen now when Inuyasha is back to himself? Will he remember what he asked her as his youkai self? Will they encounter Kikyou, and if so, what will Inuyasha do? What will inuyasha and the othes think/say when they see Kagome's new control over her powers and her fighting skills? And what will Sesshoumaru ask of Kagome? I loved your description of her training with Sesshoumaru. You've done such a wonderful job with this. MORE!!! SOON!!!
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: Princess Zeld On: February 02, 2007 18:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, the enjoyment factor isn't 10 . . . its 1,000,000,000 out of 1,000,000,000! Amazing chapter. I definetly want to read more! Hmm . . I really want to see why that Youki was so strong in Kagome. Though, I wish InuYasha would just DIE! He makes things so worse. Anyway, enough of my babbaling, I hope to see another chapter, soon! [Not to rush you] But Kudos, and good day/night!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 20:55 EST
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Fantastic chapter!! Loved it! Kagome's challenge and the mysterious occurences that followed were great! Interesting that she and Sesshoumaru are sensing each other's feelings -- what was that wave of power that hit him? What change has taken place with Kagome? What a wonderful twist that Sess can hold Tetsusaiga in the hand/arm she restored! Poor, mindless, beastly Inuyasha. Can't wait to see what happens next! This was a truly wonderful chapter!
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Title: Must. Have. More!
Reviewed By: Princess Zelda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 14:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE write more! And Fast! I love the way you are doing their relationship so far! Please Please write more! I really must read more!!!!!! O.o Hot springs? Sounds interesting. I want to see how you pull this off! Good Luck!
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 15:26 EST
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Oh this is just wonderful... Oh he's getting attached. I wonder if his father had this much trouble. XD This is a wonderful chapter, just as much as the others were. I can't wait for the next chapter. I figured Inu Yasha was going to do something stupid. Now my brain is going... Hot Springs? XD Can't wait to see how you pull this off.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 07:21 EST
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Hopefully something drastic DOES happen in the hotsprings, yes!! Great chapter! Loved the look into what Kagome is doing while at Sesshoumaru's place. Her time with Rin and Shippou is so nice, and it's nice that Sesshoumaru appreciates it, even if only slightly. Loved their sparring. Hmm. Seems Sess underestimated Inuyasha's full demon form, ne? Did he send his body back to Sango and Miroku? Poor Inu -- searching for Kagome. This is so good! More, please!
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