| "Year of the Dog" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2010 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. I love how you wrote that Inuyasha needed to turn human. I always thought that it was a way for his youkai blood to get some rest and recharge itself. I love how you showed that if he didn't allow himself to transform then his emotions became all messed up. And the way you had them get together and admit their feelings, I loved it. Way to go having Kagome tell him not to talk about himself that way. I don't know if you have written a sequel to this yet, but I would love to read it. Can't wait to read the rest of your stories.
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Title: critic
Reviewed By: LotusFlower [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha emotonal...okay.. Kagome taking advantage...okay??...Inuyasha pouty in human state?? always does...I dont know.I've read better. Maybe try slowing it down bit. And the sex scene, make me feel like I'm watching it. during the lemon, I got bored and skippe to the end. But your grammar and your spelling was excellent. Do this, look me up on mediaminer,and if you want, email your stories to me and I will proof read them for you. That is what I do. But you do have talent, I have to give that to you. I give you a 8 out of 10.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lovved this one! very good!! keep up the awesome work!! :D
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 13:25 CDT
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more please! i want everybody's reactions on both sides of the well and dont forget sesshomaru
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Reviewed By: inunut On: January 03, 2008 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it.
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 09:13 CDT
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Ooh, I do like 'em long. I thought Inuyasha's emotions and reactions seemed very well-thought out. >.< -- Shigure-san
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 15:33 CDT
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Adorable!! Absolutely kawaii!! Wait, I'm not supposed to call a lemon 'cute', aren't I? It's still adorable!! I wuv all your stories! Oh, and I agree with Inusbabe. A sequel would do nicely, and another lemon does sound intertaining . . .
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Reviewed By: Candy_luv05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 21:34 CDT
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aww, that was sweet. and it didnt start off TOO DEEP like some ppl do, it was a little slower and then it was further. that's cute! &hearts
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome awesome awesome!!! ^_^ do your best!
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Reviewed By: morwen re not logged in On: March 25, 2007 16:06 CDT
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omg, that was great! but one question, where was the rest of kagome's family? do they know what happened?
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 19:31 CST
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OMG!!! Please update soon! This is da shit!!!!! Love it!!!!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Inuhearts On: January 18, 2007 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i loved this fan fic! it was awesome! it was funny and you just didn't go straight to the sex and have no plot or any kinda stroy at all! that makes it a really good story that aren't really out there that much yuo know! no things are just random and have no meaning or point..so i realy liked your story it was a breath of fresh air for me! i hope you right more or even make it into a stroy! keep up the good work! ♥ inuhearts
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Reviewed By: Akebo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 23:52 CST
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What I loved most about this was the way that you maintained InuYasha and Kagome's character. Most authors fail at this. This one-shot was also very well writen, I enjoyd the romantic and fluffy leadup to a very emotional lemon. Status: Pretty damn happy. They say that a good writer touches life often. I think I speak for almost everyone who has read your story when I say that you have touched our lives in some way or another. Congratulations and bask in your glory. You deserve it. P.S. I would enjoy a sequel. *nudge nudge*
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 21:49 CST
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::falls over and dies:: YOU'RE RIGHT! I DO WANT MORE! ok, enough cap locks...oh man! i really need to read more! but i love the idea. very clever. very cute. this at times made me cringe from all the self-hatred, laugh at all the cuteness, and cry at all the misunderstandings. i love it.
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Reviewed By: amhor56(nsi) On: January 06, 2007 05:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably one of my favorite one shots there is out there. Definetely in the top three. Loved that you didn't rush in and make it feel totally akward. Loved the plot. Nobody has ever written a story like yours. Not even close trust me because I've read quite a lot of stories. I do hope though that you make a sequel to this story. It was simply beautiful and I love the way you described Inuyasha's thoughts and feelings. Also Kagome's responces and love for her dear Inuyasha. Great story!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitely going down as one of my favs. I think you captured their relationship uncertainties and the sweet, awkwardness of their first time perfectly. I just absolutely adored this story;D Thanks so much and great writing, as always!!
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Reviewed By: Spinner2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story from you I see! It was fantastic! please do continue it!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe nsi On: January 05, 2007 09:57 CST
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I loved it! I would love to see another chapter to it. And a lemon with his hanyou form.
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