| "A Simple Legacy (II)" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: Amazing.
Reviewed By: Princess Zeld On: March 25, 2007 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I certainly do hope you continue and do another chapter. [Or three like last time!] You make me love this story by just how distant Sesshoumaru is, and he isn't fluffy! You've done so great in this story. Also, perhaps you should do a side story on if he had taken her. Oh well. Great author, great story! Hope for more! PLEASE! :] Love the way you are doing the thing too! Is InuYasha ever going to figure it out?
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: March 24, 2007 09:19 CDT
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What an amazing story! You're characterization of seshamuru is perfect. I was a very surprised of how well you made him him. Congratulations on that now many authors can keep up with that throughout a story. They tend to either make him to fluffy or to evil. You have found the perfect medium. And well alright you kick some butt all the characters are done wonderfully. We'll can't wait to see what will happen next especially between my favorite couple kag/sesh. till next time! ^^
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 08:31 CDT
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hey did you give up on the story??? it was getting to the good parts
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 16:19 CST
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well i've just read both your stories and their very good. I hope to see an update in the chapters soon, good luck
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Reviewed By: darksereity07@yahoo On: February 26, 2007 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say, I love your story and will continue to read each up date. You are truly a talented author! Even if Inuyasha isn't yours, you seem to make better use of the story line lol.
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Reviewed By: darkserenity07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story was most captivating thank-you! I hope you continue to add to your story and up date. sincerly, Darkserenity07@yahoo
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 08:28 CST
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You leave any more cliffhangers I think that this is going to get better. Keep up the great work.
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Title: I really do like it!
Reviewed By: Princess Zeld a On: February 13, 2007 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe you've got yourself quite a fantastic story here! I do indeed like the way you're doing their relationship, Sess' and Kag', I mean. You're doing it nice and slow, unlike most stories I read. Also, I like the way you are doing the training. Their reactions to her training is quite ludicrous, but truthful. InuYasha feels itimidated, correct? IS that why he is acting so? Well, I hope to see more chapters, and soon, if possible. I am not rushing you or your writing, so do not be thinking as so. Good luck in the rest of the story - I'll keep reviewing every chapter. [2 and 3 are one review. Heh.]
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 05:37 CST
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Great chapter! When is kagome going to ask him or mention to him that she can sense his feelings? How will he react? What will that mean to him? Loved the Sess/Kouga interaction. It was neat to see Kouga in the role of Prince for once. Loved Sess' thoughts on him acting immature because of his age -- duh -- but he recognized that as something Kouga and Inu have in common. Still can't wait to see what Sess will ask Kagome to do! But, I REALLY can't wait for their little sparring session!! Will any of the others wake up and see? With the barrier they can't interrupt, but can they see them? This is going to be so much fun!! More, please!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 05:15 CST
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Just read the first chapter , so now I get to catch up. I am sensing you intend to pair Inuyasha up with Ayame. Interesting. I'm not crazy about it, but interesting. I actually like the way he has been acting kinder and more caring to Kagome. In a Sess/Kag story, the question of what to do with Inuyasha is always a big point. Do you kill him off, make him the bad guy, pair him with Kikyou or Sango (HATE that!) or an OC? I don't think I've really seen him put with Ayame before. But the fact is, if he's not with Kagome or Kikyou, I have a hard time seeing him with anyone else. He's been so loyal to Kikyou for SO long that he had a hard time letting Kagome in -- and SHE'S the only woman to ever truly accept and love him unconditionally. And look at the hard time he has letting her know how he feels. So, for him to switch affections to someone else just never rings true to me. Hmmmm. And what do you do with Kouga if he can't have Kagome or Ayame? Ah, the problems of alternative pairings. But, they sure make for fun stories, don't they? I wonder what Shippou wants to tell Kagome. And I'm still dying to know what Sesshoumaru's request will be.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: February 09, 2007 16:37 CST
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Wow this story is amazing! I love how everything is going so far and it's written wonderfully! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!!!!!!
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Title: Yay im the first
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay im so happy that you made part 2 i love this fic and i like that fluffy and kagome are gona meet real soon i hope inuyasha and kagome will still be friend when kagome goes bac with fluffy and i love your fic so please update soon
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