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"Such a Small World" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ]
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 Reviewed By: Laria [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 21, 2007 00:12 CST
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OOhh I can't wait to see what Bankotsu does to that idiot!! That was such a COOL story! I totally hope Hiei proposes later!
 Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2007 02:36 CST
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Does Kikyo really love Kagome or was she just saying that for Inuyasha's benefit? How protective is she towards Kagome? How does Sesshomaru feel about Kagome? Does Kagome and Inuyasha know of each other before or after she and Inuyasha was dating? How does he feel about Kagome dating his brother and now Hiei? How protective is he of her? If he is protective of her, what will he do, once word gets around about what had happened between her and Yusuke? Does Kagome know that Yusuke was married? Will she and Keiko ever meet and if so, how will that go? Have Yukina met Kagome and if so are they friends? If they are friends, where would that put her, since she is also friends with Keiko? Will Yusuke still try to get Kagome? What ever happened to the sex tape? Will Kagome and Inuyasha patch things up? Is Kikyo right about Inuyasha's love for her, or does she have doubts when it comes to his feelings for Kagome? Especially if the two become friends. What happens when Kagome is in trouble, despite how many friends are by her side, Inuyasha rushes to her side or he always calls to make sure she is all right? (Just thought Kikyo should taste of what she put Kagome through.) Wonder if Yusuke will try anything with Kagome, since he knows she has so far, other then Hiei two protective friends. Please update ASAP. Great story. Sorry I went overboard with questions.
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2007 01:48 CST
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Awesome chapter!! Yusuke is such a good villain -- what a jerk! He has brief thoughts that make you feel a LITTLE sympathetic, but then he immediately blows it with his utter stupidity. It was sad that his best friend is dead, and that his only other friends are now his enemies. (BTW, I love the references you keep making to these characters' OTHER personnas -- trying to "outfox" Kurama. Heh heh!) I wondered if Inuyasha and Kikyou were going to be in this as more than mentioned characters. Both of them sound like Yusuke -- they can't be happy, even with each other, unless they're living dangerously and playing with other peoples' hearts. Hmmmm. Wonder if Inuyasha might not decide he really DID have feelings for Kagome if he runs into her again. (I'd like for him to get a little of that Hiei and Bankotsu treatment.) And what was up with Kikyou trying to get Inu to think Kagome was seeing Sess? They really are twisted, aren't they? I liked the Kag/Hiei interaction with the ice cream and all. And I lOVED Bankotsu and Jakotsu there at the end! This is so good!
 Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2007 00:28 CST
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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Kagome is a little too insecure and thats kind of annoying but still I love the story. I keep waiting for Hiei to do something to make Kagome more secure in their relationship. Will Kagome and Keiko meet face to face? That would really give the story a twist. Keep up the good work and update please!
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2007 04:05 CST
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Poor Keiko. When is Kurama going to see her? Will Yusuke wise up and try to talk to her? I like Bankotsu as Sango's boyfriend -- AND the fact that he doesn't like Inuyasha. And the tidbit about Miroku and Botan was great. Hmmm. Will Inu and Kikyou make an appearance? Poor Kagome, too. How will she get over the guilt? She really is terrible insecure, isn't she? It's great that Hiei has decided to work things out with her! I guess he listened to Kurama's advice somewhat, didn't he? It was interesting that Kuramam pointed out her insecurity about their relationship to him. Maybe she needs to find something to do to make her feel better about herself, or maybe something will happen that will help her see herself differently. This is really such an intersting take on these characters. Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2007 02:10 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Please update soon.
 Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 10, 2007 00:03 CST
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IT's great i can't wait till you update again. I do hope that you update soon. Untill then keep up the great work.
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 09, 2007 03:24 CST
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Wow! What a dark, angst-ridden story. I don't know if I can read much more in one sitting without becoming completely depressed. I like the way you've written them as humans -- very unique way to present them. And I like the various relationships/friendships you've got going. But, whew! I hope Hiei and Kagome get a chance to be happy together. And Keiko and kurama. Now, Yusuke just needs his butt kicked.
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