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| "FAKE In Love: Act XXI, Above And Below" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: waves
Reviewed By: rivlee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 16:12 EST
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One of my friends pointed me over to your writing since we were debating FAKE sequels and the such, and, well, I must thank her. I'm reading out of sequence here (which makes sense since, well, I read the manga out of sequence) and I really must commend you on your story telling. Your charcters are full, your writing is engaging and, honestly, I feel as if I'm watching an episode of Law and Order or CSI:NY (for me, that is a good thing) ;) You'll probably see me popping up reviewing stories from long ago, but I just wanted to drop a note on this one. Good luck with everything, fic related or not and thanks for sharing your writing with all of us.
| Title: As Always
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 21:30 EST
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To The Grumpiest of Demons, As always, another fantastic tale. You continue to take Dee and Ryo in new directions, have them involved in new situations that are interesting and challenging, and come up with storylines that are fascinating. I never would have thought of "Mole Parties" and I live here in NYC. The love between your Dee and Ryo continues to grow, and yet it never seems stale or boring. I feel like I am exploring this love, living this love with them when I read your work. You do it with such a gentle, flawless style that as a reader I'm able to simply slip into your world, never feeling like you are beating me over the head with an agenda or trying to overwhelm me with sap. You make them so appealing, their live so honest and real and yet so warm, in spite of what they may be going through together, that I want to continue with them on their journey for as long as possible. As always, you've introduced interesting new characters (Matches is a definite fave) while bringing back into play old ones - including Penguin and JJ. It was great to be there again, with what feels like old, but ever exciting, friends. It has been a while since you've updated, and that's an absolute shame. No one does FAKE like you do. And I have to agree with Vixendis and GarnetKoryu. There are worse writers out there that may get more reviews, but no one in the FAKE fandom is more loved or respected as a writer. I know you've said you don't know if and when you will pick this road back up again, but please. You are one of the few people out there doing it right, and we need you. There are ALOT of us out there, we are just a quiet lot. Please, write more. And write more soon. We've missed you! As Always, Forever Your Fan, BlueSimplicity
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat (too lazy to log-in) On: February 20, 2007 13:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always I love your work. It is an inspiration to me as a beginning fanfic writer because it is so incredibly well written and characterized. LiveJournal is really great right now. There are so many supportive fanfic communities there, including my favorite: Yaoi_Challenge. I hope that writing this series continues to bring you pleasure. I know it gives me great pleasure to read it.
| Title: Truly Amazing
Reviewed By: Vixendis On: February 19, 2007 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing as always! So much depth. I love how everything isn't all neatly colored black and white. Your ability to write convincing stories with real human emotions and motives always astounds me. Ryo and Dee are depicted so well, and reading their moments together always gives me the warm fuzzies...amongst other things. I absolutely adore your fics. I've read every one of them, and found myself hooked on your style of writing. When I first started reading FAKE in Love, I completely lost track of time and ended up reading for the entirety of the day. Your storylines are always so refreshing and deep, they keep me reading with bated breath for the next plot twist. With other writers, I find myself skipping over scenes from lack of interest, but I never would even dream of skipping with your stories, I think I'd miss too much. Thankyou for always having some sort of plot. Reading yaoi fanfiction that's written just for the sake of boy on boy action gets boring and tiresome. Please keep writing and if you travel to another site give a heads up so I can follow. Much love! ~Vix
| Reviewed By: maylee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 19:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for another installment of Fake In Love! I'm always so happy when I see that you have another chapter written and posted. ^_^ Thank you for writing these wonderful stories and giving us fans more stories of the Fake boys and girls!
| Reviewed By: GarnetKoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 19:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I started reading your works, you were only at act IV of your fake series, a series, I might add, that has huge hit counts and a devout following. I have always thought it outrageous that more people don't review, and when you don't update, I fell justified for yelling at them in my feeble brain...I have followed you through 22 stories now, all complete, multi-chaptered fics, each one taking the reader through a creative and deep storyline. By the time you finish the story you feel it is the most perfect, well written work out there. I am not a writer myself, I hold myself in that category of people who are too lazy to really get anything done, and when I read most fictions these days I don't bother to review. Somehow I feel that all the stuff I read is repetitive, the characters overused or abused or more well written somewhere else...When I see fictions with huge reviews I always seem to think back on how good your work is and how stupid it is that this other crack of an author who can't even write a good opening dialogue has 200 reviews and hasn't bothered to update in seven months... I suppose what I'm trying to get at is this: you are a fantastic author, I worship the cyberspace you surf through, and I think that anyone who doesn't review you should be shot. Ha! Anyone who has a problem with that can review, and thus save themselves... jk jk, but seriously, to everyone out there, Share the love with the best authors out there before they tire of dealing with us lowly mortals.
| Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: uxolo On: February 18, 2007 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very happy to see a new installment of your Fake series. I've enjoyed all of them. You manage to completely capture the characters and create engrossing detective stories. You're a great writer is the point I'm trying to get across. Thanks for all the great stories!
| Reviewed By: SweetRinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 02:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see that you had created another installment, it made my day. As usual your story was wonderful and I hope that you continue to create more such stories. ;)
| Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 19:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work. I re-read your entire FAKE series recently, and was very happy to see this next installment. It's great to see how you have developed the characters and the world. I also like the fatigue that Dee and Ryo had in this installment. It seems you've been playing with the burnout factor for a while, and it's coming home to roost now. It's a pleasure reading this, I hope you continue if the muse strikes you.
| Title: ....Damn.
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 18:02 EST
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Damn it! I had that whole thing separated into nice little paragraphs, and it ended up in a big block of text anyway.... Sorry about that....
| Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 18:01 EST
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*dances and twirls* Yay, an update! Feels like I've been waiting forever! Hmm....question! Do you read fanfiction as well as write it? My stories are utter crap compared to yours, but....you can check it out if you want.... I do sort of like my "Dead Men Tell No Tales" one, but....that's it. That's all I like. Everything else I wrote....years and years ago....back when I was really really stupid....and I really should delete them..... Anyway! If you ever need someone to rant and rave about Fake with....you can always toss an e-mail or IM my way. I usually end up ranting and raving with myself 'cause I have no one else to do it with.... And as a fellow Fake author and fan, it'd be nice to have someone to discuss fanfic ideas with....or anything else, really! Yes, I sound desperate, I know....I'm always looking for friends and fellow writers....I'm really the only one in my circle of friends who is an avid writer, and even though I'm very, very bad at writing fanfiction, I really do think I'm improving! Well, anyhow, if you're interested in reading my work or just raving about Fake or anything else....drop an e-mail! ....And no, I am not a stalker, I swear! I always come off as stalkerish when I write reviews like this....
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