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Reviewed By: LemonLoki On: September 13, 2007 18:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
because this was from the point of view i'd always seen the show, and that nobody has ever written a chapter like that. it was bloody brilliant.
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Reviewed By: PirateCaptainBo On: September 13, 2007 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHh wow. love it. haha update soon!! heehee. So glad Kouga is back!! haha. love the picture moment even if it wasn't taken... awe. XD Love the ending also!
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Title: chapter 15
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 18:15 PDT
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That was so soft and warm. A breather from all the angst. Loved it. Those two would look beautiful, all snuggled up together. Poor Inuyasha is so confused. I'm sure that it will take some major trauma to get him to accept Sesshoumaru. I can definitely see a kick ass action scene in the future. I admit with major guilt that I skimmed some of the lengthier sections. Sorry, I'm too tired a super stressed out for a lot of introspection, but I will definitely re-read it later. I did love the chapter, and it wasn't short. Not much happened, but it was enough. We were given a view of our favorite characters snuggling, heard Inuyasha arguing the hell out of himself, heard Sesshoumaru displaying unusual characteristics that were believable under the circumstances, saw some bipolar Kagome...LOL, Kouga being his usual cocky self, Shippou trying to help his dad, wondering about the effects of the two marks. Actually, there was a lot. You leave us anticipating the next segment. That's a good thing. I look forward to the next installment. ^_^ Snow
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Title: chapter 14
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 17:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Sesshomaru did some fast thinking there. Loved the whole growth cycle with Inu. Awesome description of the symptoms. I'm not feeling great, so the review sucks. But, I really loved it. Off to the new chappie! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: September 12, 2007 16:51 PDT
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yay you updated. That was so cute!!!! Thanks!!! I laughed and everyone around me stared like I was crazy ^_^'. anyway please continue to review. Ja ne
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Title: Mmmm...
Reviewed By: star_struck [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 09:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...you amaze me!!!! I think I might just love you lol jk This is possibly my new favorite fanfic! I absolutely love it (though your spelling leaves me wanting at some points...just so you know it is spelled hanyou, and apostrophies belong with a possesive thing, like for example: Tetsaiga's power...or they can be used for a compact word(I think that that is what it is called...) like can't lol) other than that I am in total love...and like you said about yourself in an earlier chapter, I hate waiting around for people to update on their stories! I understand the whole writers block thing...I am having trouble trying to figure out how to put one of my ideas for a fanfic into a good story...I have it so bad that I haven't even been able to start yet because things are so jumbled in my head lmao! And as for the Daigon person...he kinda reminds me of golem from lotr if that doesn't sound too weird...anyways, great story, keep up the good work, and hurry up with that update!!!! lol
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: August 20, 2007 17:12 PDT
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ooooooooohhhhhhhhh!!! More Ciffies! Why must you torture me so? Poor Inu-chan he's so self concious(Sp?) Sessy's desperate and Kagome's b*tchy As usual( why won't she DIE) U 2 Sango!!. Is koga coming back 2? Anyway update thanks and keep up the good work.( God, I sound like a fudging teacher)
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 04:14 PDT
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now that is fine cuddling. thank you, for a restful chapter after a painful one. it looks there will be a resolution of their concerns. nesting. huh? i like the term, although yes, it seems to be more applicable to the avian species. but i am looking forward to resolutions of some sorts. and i am glad for miroku's understanding, his hand may be naughty and all, but he's a good man.
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Reviewed By: Lady Yueh On: August 19, 2007 22:11 PDT
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I have to tell you that this is one of the best Inuyasha fics that I've read. I'm usually very picky because I'm an Inuyasha fan and he's usually paired with Kagome [whom I despise] or written horridly. In many of the Sess/Inu fics that I've read Inuyasha is so out of character. As if suddenly having an iota of Sesshoumaru's attention turns him into some sex-fiend. It seems as if it is Inuyasha that always has to conform to Sesshoumaru's standards and prove his worth. Sesshouarmu's actions are usually justified or ignored as are their effect on Inuyasha. I'm very glad to see that in your story, Sesshoumaru is given a dose of reality because he's in the wrong. And Inuyasha is really being portrayed as the kick-ass, strong hanyou that he is. He's proud, stubborn, loud and in your face and you've got that down pat. You also have his inner conflicts down well, they're not overdone or downplayed. It rings truly. And you're not in some rush to get Inuyasha to "forgive" Sesshoumaru and dump them into bed together. I've found that sex scenes are usually boring or bad unless I'm emotionally invested in the characters, if there's no intimacy then it's just another sex scene among hundreds. Props on the Inutaisho death scene, you wrung out some tears from me, which is rare. And Sess's inner-youkai is a riot. Fantastic Job! I await future updates with anxious glee. Lady Yueh
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Reviewed By: pipsqueak On: August 19, 2007 01:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not good at writing reviews at all but I wanted to let you know that I think this fic is really good.
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Reviewed By: hi On: August 17, 2007 18:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ur story is soooooooooooo asome please pleaseplease keep on writin or typin' the story it's so good!
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: August 17, 2007 16:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This new chapter was kickass extreme. I loves it more then I loves potatoes. Thanks so much for the update. I'm glad Shesso is finally trying I hope he can get it one with Inu. thanks so much for the update. Best wishes and good waves.
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Title: Chapt. 14
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the way that Sesshoumaru flexes his political muscle and uses it to get Inuyasha moving along with him. Not sexy but it gets the job done; defiantly more subtle than glomping onto him and kissing him sensless like his youkai would have. Inuyasha would rip his lips off if he tried that approach right now. Poor Inuyasha is so out of it that he doesn't react to the "m" word when Sesshoumaru said it while describing what the mate mark can do. Yeah, I think Sesshoumaru will be getting more verbal abuse, at the minimum, from his intended. The rest of the group will be waking up to see them looking like a giant moth cocoon. That should be interesting! Sorry to hear that you have gotten hate mail; your story is rocks!
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD!! i love your new chapter i mean...i have just fallen in love with this fic all over again....i hope inu-chan can learn to adjust to sess new behavior....and i like how you have sess explaining to inu kinda what is going on
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Title: I'm back dum dum dum lol
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 14:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok bummer it's not yoda but that's ok you came out with another chapter YEAH!!!!! Wow Sesshomaru got his work cut out for him, Inuyasha's not going to make it easy, but I hope not to hard either I don't want it to take to long we would LOVVVE to read another Lemon coming our way. Maybe seeshomaru can explain whats happening to him, I hope Inuyasha's get a tail that'll be something fun and new. so much pain sesshy-poo, gonna make it feel better. I love the monk. but dang Kagome's gotta go just make Inuyasha seen the girls away! Nesting sound good. Hm love to read something new to the inu-youkai way of life, so nice touch and hoping to read more of that. Sesshy will make it all better. And I don't know how I didn't figure that Nefrume was killed, maybe because I didn't think that they would kill her because it could start a war. hm maybe they could learn from each other and train and other things. Hm can't wait for the morning after. (^_^) plz update soon. ladytokyo
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