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Reviewed By: Brittni Some1 On: March 21, 2007 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, these chapters are majorly short!! I know it can sometimes be hard to write long chapters, but I'm really hoping that they get longer!! I can't wait til you get more into the story!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! Not much to go on yet, but its got lots of potential and I really think I'm gonna like it, so update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Tweak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 05:03 CDT
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you gotta add the next chapter! this one was to short! this is good, you should keep writing it. hope to see another chapter soon!!
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Reviewed By: Bleach lover #1 On: March 19, 2007 19:06 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE RIGHT AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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