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Reviewed By: mikogirl13 On: February 12, 2008 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awsome and a little scary but it was still awsome! Please write more soon please!
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 18:26 EST
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=) i'm glad you updated and i hope you really can upload another chap by v-day... i don't know why but i was hoping kagome got caught by inuyasha haha things would have gotten much more interesting lol...
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:24 EST
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I can't believe Kagoem snuck out adn manged to get back without her master noticing! If Inuyasha were truly that stupid, he'd never get to be at the top! People don't get welathy without inventive new ways, courage, and excellence at manipulating others... not to mention brains! Also, how could Miroku keep Inuyasha talking for that long? Knowing him (and his nose), he probably has a cordless phone in the house and checking on his pet the minute the clock strikes 11. According to my calculations, a 30-minute drive on 50 miles per hour will take at least 17.647 minutes driving at 85mph. Where is the world did MIroku drag up so much stuff to talk up, especially his Inuyasha threatening to kill him? I personally think that both Kagome adn Sango need a good trashing!
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Reviewed By: iluvGeeWay4lif [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:22 EST
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OMG FINALLY U UPDATED I THOUGHT U WERE GONNA QUIT!!!!!! THANK CHRIST!!!! DONT 4GET 2 UDATE ON VDAY OR I'LL KILL YOU MUHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHAHAHHAHHA
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 14:04 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I have a feeling it isn't going to be that easy. Inuyasha is going to find out somehow that she snuck out and punish her for it. I just hope it doesn't cost Sango her job. I liked how you started to develop the relationship between Miroku and Sango. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Willowstar14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 13:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I love this story! I've been looking for this update for like ever. Don't you think Inuyasha will notice a bunch of party clothes on her floor if he comes into her room before she gets out of the shower? Well, I hope I find out in the next chapter. Update soon! Ja Ne! ~Willowstar14(=^-^=)
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 09:26 EST
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please update agian sooon it's been soooo long!
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 02:29 EST
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Yay! An update. Really cute haha, I don't know how..Maybe just because in this chapter Kagome actually acted like a normal teen sneaking in late after her curfew. Haha. Loved it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: future author On: February 11, 2008 00:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, just checking to see if you updated. I see that you haven't so i decided to write a review and ask if you could update some time soon. If you're busy i hope you are able to get a break to update. Until the next update, good luck.
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Title: WHAT!?!
Reviewed By: iluvGeeWay4lif [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 20:41 EST
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what happened u havent updated forEVER!!!! IM DYING OVER HERE!!!! PLZZZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!THIS IS THE BEST FANFICTION IVE EVER READ!!!!! =(
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Reviewed By: SexyChicklet17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 10:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you updated! Good new chapter, can't wait for the next one. I hope Kagome doesn't get caught.
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Reviewed By: sweet_serena16 On: January 04, 2008 02:18 EST
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OMG I'm so glad you posted XD took me a while to find you again lol i switched pc's and lost my link >.>...but i found you yay me ^_^ Love the chapter can't wait til you get to update again I'm dying to know how the night plays out
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a creative story! I love that Kagome has so much fight in her. It's like, he's taken her from her family, tortured her, marked her, touched her, beat her, and eventually he is going to take her innocence. I hope that Kagome will adopt the mindset that: I might as well keep fighting because everytime he takes something from me it means I have less and less to lose. So fuck him. :P Happy Writing! I hope that you will defintely finish this story and not abandon it. :)
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 17:03 EST
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I love it. Write more. Oh and Inu yasha the best is not always the best, learned that one the hard, very hard, way. Ciao.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 11:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... interesting events occuring... hope kagome & sango get back before inuyasha finds out... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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