| "If Wishes Were Horses" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: sa198 On: June 25, 2008 01:36 EDT
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This is a really interesting story so far! I like it a lot! You said there was a poll on your bio, but it's not there...
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Reviewed By: orangeduck On: June 20, 2008 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beyond awesome so far - you are exceeding my previous notions of angst fics (something I am quite fons of) and doing so without an overabundance of DOOM (which is quite the task, you've got Fuji to contend with, kuddos!) keep the grammer the way it is, what you are doing keeps the flow of the story real, nobody speaks (and hopefully thinks) in perfect grammer, thank you for remebering that. many fics of this intent lack that informality and give me a headache so I approve wholeheartedly. I can't wait to see what DOOM Fuji has in store, and Karpuin is utterly adorable!
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Reviewed By: orangeduck On: June 20, 2008 11:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beyond awesome so far, on par and exceding previous notions of great angst fics...I personally love the direct use of "improper" grammer, because it's what makes diologue realistic, something that's hard to remember for some writers - nobody uses perfect grammer when speaking or thinking (I hope!) - keep it up, can't wait to see what Fuji-kun has instore for poor, poor, Rinko. (hehehe)
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Reviewed By: dmennea On: May 10, 2008 01:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i do want more of this story i find it enjoyable and very interesting though i am worried about ryoma going to rinko first therefore am highly anticipating next section
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Reviewed By: Blackrose4512 On: March 15, 2008 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story and written nicely. This story has captured my interest and I can not wait to see more! Can't wait for the next update, Blackrose451 (to lazy to log in)
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Reviewed By: ben10 On: December 15, 2007 21:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, this is really good. dude you have got to finish this
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Reviewed By: ilikecheese On: November 23, 2007 09:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thought that this was really good! i cant wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: m_ann1130 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 08:36 EST
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It's an enjoyable fanfiction...^_^ tezuka is kinda OOC...i think...but it suits the story, so why not? ^_^ hope you update soon...^_^
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Reviewed By: rollypolly1 On: November 08, 2007 11:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was like the best thing that i have read. i really with that you would continue the story soon. it made me cry, then i showed this to my friends and they even cried. PLEASE continue
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Reviewed By: yvonne On: August 20, 2007 03:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
almost made me cry cannot wait for the next chapter, just started watching the anime Ryoma is one charectors that i like
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Title: i cried
Reviewed By: dawnmm On: May 03, 2007 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cried this was fantastic hope we dont have to wait as long for the next one
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Reviewed By: kate1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 04:33 EDT
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Hey, Il ove the stor, been waiting for it to be udated. But does it have to be slash? :[
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Reviewed By: Fluffy of the SKT [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 03:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a beautiful story, for lack of other words to describe it. Well, no other words besides well written, well thought out, and suspensefull enough for me to want to check my e-mail every half hour. Thank you very much for the update.
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Reviewed By: kate1992 On: April 10, 2007 05:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this, poor Ryoma :[. Could u hurry up and update this is good, i gave you mostly all high rating because i thought this was a really good idea, whats going to happen now? Update fast! :]
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Reviewed By: animegrl0610 On: April 06, 2007 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so sad...what Ryoma is having to go through is an incredibly hard situation. The way you dealt with it and had Ryoma reacting was very well written. Please update this story soon. I can't wait to read more.
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