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| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] | Reviewed By: jade_san On: July 27, 2007 14:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic i'm always checking for the updates ^_^ please update soon it's really great. if u want u can e-mail me and let me know what's up inujade@yahoo.com
| Title: Ch. 11
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 06:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It did?! 0.0 omg! That's so cool! :D And your very welcome, but they come from my heart! It defiantly was, Kagome and Hiei are gonna become mates! (dances) You defiantly are building up to a wonderful chapter! And I can't wait either! ^_^ Yes, I did hit Kurama w/ a rolled up newspaper, it didn't work out the way I wanted it too, but o well, I have Naru-chan to protect me! (glomps awesome ninja) And yes, I love that! :D hehe, and Hiei is so… *glomp* XD omg, Eishumaru! U pervert! Lol! I did like it! It was awesome! :D And shame on Kagura for being so mean! That wasn't nice! But, Eishu-chan did put her in her place, no? :P He's a good son! And I love how you detail the houses and rooms and stuff, so kick butt! Rofl! Hiei's sleeping right across from her! That was rich! Lmfao! >u< And I laugh when the boys are all talking bad about Yemon! He's one mean cookie! *smacks him w/ a rolled up newspaper w/ a brick inside it* No! You bad wolf! You go outside now! XD And at the end of their sequence where they're talkin about Kagome and her lover: "Oh, crap!" Eishumaru smacked a hand over his eyes. "Now every little sound I hear at night is going to have me wondering if it's them." Ha! Pure genius! And what I really love about your story (besides the awesome Hiei/Kagome scenes and the hilarious scenes) is that you don't bash Kazuma-kun! Thank god! I hate when he gets bashed like that! It makes me mad/sad. :( He's such a good/righteous/loving guy. "Hn. An onna, -- what else?" ahahaaaa!!! Perfect Hiei answer! That truly made my day! "And you wouldn't make a very pretty woman, anyway" I think Hiei would make a very pretty women! *the song Pretty Women starts to play in the background* I'd love to see Hiei blush b/c he's embarresed! I'd snap a quick pic on my phone and text it to Kazuma-kun and Yuu-chan and save it as my background! *throws confetti* And I love that the beach's sand turns into Onyx stones when Kagome-chan bleeds on them! I so want one of those gems! XD Poor Kagome-chan fell asleep in her bath… She could have drowned! Thank god for Hiei! *glomp* And I'm so happy for Kazuma-kun! *dances* He gets to spend time wih his fiance! But, I started to cry when Hakkaku-kun was hurt and dying! It was so sad! But, I'm very glad hat Kagome coul help him! That made me happy! Aw! Hiei was being sentimental, and caressed her cheek! *fangirl sigh* So kawaii XD I so loved this one, and I hope 2 read more from you soon! Your stuff totally kicks can! YAH!
| Title: chapter one is finally up
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 11:49 EDT
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er...y'know that yuyu hakusho fic that i wrote ages ago...yeah... I updated!! Please read and review! I promise i'm only getting started... :]
| Reviewed By: ebi-chan On: July 24, 2007 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They KISSED, OMG they KISSED!! I can't tell you how excited I was to read that they finally locked lips!! I got out of my chair and did a happy dance (and considering I'm at work, it was quite funny!). BTW Kagura is a LIAR, I don't care that her son "looks" like Sesshoumaru, that doesn't mean diddly... I can name at least 5 people off the top of my head that resemble each other so much you'd swear that they were siblings and they're not related at all by a long shot!! Ugh, how dare she!!! Sorry I'm a little stressed at having my internet down at home and only having time to read and review while at work and it's getting a little tricky trying to make it look like I'm working. Oh well like I've said before I'm addicted to this story and if I have to read it at work then I HAVE to read it at work. Well my normally super long (OMG, Marcia, Marcia Marcia)reviews won't be making an appearance since I'm at work, so I'll make sure to type the max for the next chapter. Thanks again for a great chapter, I loved so many things about this chapter too, but I can't be on here too long. But I will tell you that I love that Kurama/Youko may be seeing "the light" so to speak in regards to Kagome's innocense!! There were some times were he kept pushing for guilt that I wanted to reach through the computer and smack him up side the head and then tie him up, but he'd probably enjoy that too much!! Anyway, like I said another awesome chapter and I know I can't wait for the next chapter - Just call me Pookie, lol. Hopefully my internet issues will be resolved by next chapter and then I can really enjoy reading and reviewing without feeling like a sneak thief!! ~ebi-chan
| Title: CH. 11: OOO Child!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so glad when Kagura got the who blazed slapped out of her! Ha!Ha! I love her sons, You've done an excellent job on the boys. Although Eishumaru is more like Koga, flirtatious to the max! I agree with Kags about purifying her mates so they don't fall victim of a walking dead. I don't blame her at all. Such a turn around for our boy Hiei. Finally got that kiss uh! He's in deep now! They have got to get Kikyou, Darn that clay pot should have been shattered a long time ago, quick where's my my mallet!. I love your imaginstion with the blood turning into onyx on the sand. Lovely! Just Lovely! I wonder whatKurama is going to do with it? Love what you're doing with this story and the crossover. Love and Peace!
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 16:56 EDT
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Oh my goddess, that was beautiful, some questions answered, others aroused, write more ASAP!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: July 20, 2007 14:17 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I started reading this story for a couple of reasons. The main one was that it had been nominated in the IYFG in crossovers. I am usually ambivalent about crossovers because so often it is just a way for one character in one universe to have sex with a character in another. I also am usually wary because I don't know who the hell the characters are that are being talked about. The first chapter of this story had a lot going against it because of these two. I had no clue who the characters from YYH were, you seemed to be planning on pairing Kagome up with one of them, and the first thing you did was kill off three of my favorite characters in IY. InuYasha, Sesshoumaru, and Kouga…all dead…poof. But then I gave it a chance because I had heard good things about this story, and I am pretty glad that I did in the end. I still really don't know a whole lot about YYH, but I have been totally sucked in by the storyline. The entanglements of the murders (and not even knowing how they had all been murdered until later chapters) have had me intrigued. I couldn't stop reading. And now I am up to the final published chapter and I still don't know who the killer is!!! I just wanted to shake the computer and yell at it until it gave up the information. There are a number of things that I have really enjoyed. The sons have been a joy to read about. Inu's son being raised by Sess, Sess's son being raised by Kouga, and Kouga's son being raised alone (like Inu) by only his mother; it is a nice circle in my mind. I like the markings on the faces as they mature in power and strength. It seems like something completely canon even though it isn't. I have enjoyed the way Kagome has tripped around her suitors like a Prima Ballerina. I have enjoyed the relationship between Kagome and Hiei (and not just the sex.) I have enjoyed the storyline and all the twists and turns that you have taken us though as you tell us first one and then another was the murderer. I have enjoyed the descriptions of the day to day life and holiday for the larger group. Now I like lemons as much as the next person….perhaps more than most. I have enjoyed the lemons but there have been times when I read through them thinking, 'ok, get back to what was happening!' Weird, huh? There are a number of things that I haven't liked a lot too. I didn't like that you killed off my boys. ::sniff sniff:: Especially Inu dying on his night of weakness. He had to have known who killed him and the torment of those last seconds of his life would have been so sad. I don't I haven't especially liked that there hasn't been one hard ounce of evidence one way or the other. I only want to be lost for a little while before the detectives come up with something! It makes them seem a little off. I also have been somewhat saddened that the souls of my boys have been 'purified' so they will be unable to go through reincarnation. I hope that perhaps you have someway around that, kinda like the kami bringing Kagome back…. Maybe? A couple of questions: How long do you plan on making this story? We will eventually find out who killed the taiyoukai and why, right? Are you going to show us the boys coming into their own as far as the lands? Will the taiyoukai make an appearance at all? Thanks for writing for us and I look forward to reading more of this piece.
| Reviewed By: LordoftheWest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 02:13 EDT
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i'm loving this so much. just to let u knnow i'm ladyofthewest on aff. i would be reviewing on there but i know to much because of this site. i got a question could kanna be the reason why the souls didn't cross? o well i'll find out soon anough. bye till then.
| Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! your story is awesome!you're a great writer!
| Title: btw
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 14:22 EDT
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by the way: the review that says 'iam beckyducky signed out' in the reviewed by section is me. :] *forgot to sign on* oops!!
| Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: iam beckyducky signed out On: July 19, 2007 14:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh goodness! I love your twists!! i really wish your characters were real so that i could see what they look like. It's so strange cuz Daitano acts so much like sess but he's inuyasha's son. Eishumaru is sess's but acts kinda like kouga . And Sassouta?? He is Kagome's son through and through. I loved the ending of this chapter . Normally, fluff kinda makes want to retch, but you did a really good job of making it believable Your chapters are always worth the wait!
| Reviewed By: venusrox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story!!! I've been reading it ever since it came out and it has been sooo suspenseful. Please continue and pleeeeease let Kagome be innocent and Kagura's kid be someone else's, NOT Sesshoumaru's. PLEASE!!!
| Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: July 19, 2007 01:03 EDT
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I'm hoping when everyone finds out once and for all about Kagura's son, everyone from Spirit world to Demon world also hears it at the same time. (especially if he's not Sesshomaru's child. Otherwise I might have some heads, starting with you.) (darn can't have your head, till you are done with this story.)(Lucky you I happen to like this story, so far. hehe) Wonder if someone has proof that Kagome is innocent, but doesn't realize it. However if someone perilously withholding information, they may not be so lucky, especially if the real killer knows about it? Maybe her sons would go easy on her/him/them. How will they catch the real killer. I was so hoping it was Sesshomaru's spirit coming to haunt Kagura for her lies. Maybe Koga, Inuyasha, and Sesshomaru's ghosts are haunting the real killer. Please update ASAP Thanks, just want I needed. Been craving for good fanfic with Kagome and one of her many lovers.
| Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Ok, for the record, I am not the best at writing reviews for the fics I read (to be honest I really kinda suck at it), but this story is GREAT and I felt like I had to let you know what I thought. *shrugs* That's just me though. First off, I love the way you don't have the relationship between Kags and Hiei being a gradual thing and not a rapid or instant one. Then there's the comic bits thrown in to lighten the mood and such, but at the same time you really get the seriousness of the situation that these characters have found themselves in, it's a great mix. It's interesting to see how you portray each character in their parts and keep the interest levels so high, because believe me when I say I cannot wait until I get the notices on updates for fics. You are doing an amazing job and I cannot wait to see where you continue to take this story. The cliffies are torture by the way, but at the same time have me waiting all the more anxiously for the next part. You definitely cause a wide range of emotions through your writing, from laughter (and lots of it) to suspense and wondering, that is something that takes talent and you seem to have that in abundance. ^.~ Keep up the amazing work and I'll keep trying to guess a bit of what's coming... Till Next time, Michi " " ^.^ U
| Reviewed By: jen9 On: July 18, 2007 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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