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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 12:47 CDT
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A transformation of Rin??? And seriously, that must be the WORST way ever to be interrupted during foreplay..!! On the other hand, Inuyasha's day wasn't so good either. : ) So there's no doubt where the spark is... but where's the love? Oh, we'll see...
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Reviewed By: inugirl2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 08:38 CDT
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Yes Yes Yes!!! This is getting frigg'n exciting. Can't wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooOOOOooo what' happening???? ahhh lol good job update soon! ^_^ ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 21:46 CDT
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Oh, what'll Kag do now? Post soon! ☺☺
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 20:18 CDT
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LOVE IT!!!!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cpater 5 is chapter one I think there is a glich.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Fan3006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i really like this fan fic. Its like my favorite as of right now. Please keep updating. this is very interesting. The Shes/Kagome was a surprise i have read a few fics with thouse two there allways interesing. Well love the fic so far keep up the good work. Please. P.S. On the Spelling and grammar rating don't take my word for it cuz i cant spell worth a shit.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE ONEGAI!!!please you write very well and a lemon IS going to come up soon?!? i'd love to read more of you story so please up date soon. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no she is going to feel bad if anyting happens to rin. and he will be pissed.
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Reviewed By: inugirl2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great job so far! I'm intrigued to what's going to happen next. I love the love triangle haha. I'm so excited you have a bunch of chapters written already so we don't have to wait. Why are you just posting one chapter a day if you've written already...I'm ready to read more! :)
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great start...although I am a major Kag/Inu...pairing. Is Sesshomaru under her spell? I wonder...or is it? Look forward until your next update, Chanda
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 12:16 CDT
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Oooh, our little Yashie has second thoughts? Or is he just being possessive again? Like "OK, I don't want her, but I want her to want me"? Sess seems very determinated, I like his straightforwardness. And even if he's quite OOC, he's under a spell, so it's excusable. Poor little Rin will NOT be taken by force, neither married to Inuyasha! Something is way off with that! Oh no, you're going to make it happen just because I said that, aren't you??? Heh, all in all, just go on plotting! I'd like to see how you'll go from here!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow This is a great story! please update soon!! ^_^ ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 05:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol og god she is in trouble!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 05:10 CDT
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Hehe, I like this beginning! I am of course always fan of Inuyasha/Kagome, but I won't say no to a nice little Sess/Kag either - especially a story like this! It'll be a nice little chitchat going on when Sess realises Kagome's been using a potion on him... and to see how Inuyasha will react to it all. Interesting apporach, allowing Kagome to really be a teenanger in emotions! Somehow, she's always bound to have emotions far beyond her age, straight to spiritual skipping the physical. Indeed interesting... and promising!
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