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| "To Forge the Master" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Platina On: September 22, 2007 19:00 CDT
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I absolutly loved the traditional bit were Link saw the decorated windows which told him about the Trials that he has to face in order to fufill the Legend that surrounds his heroic fate. The Trials are (obviously) the monsters that he has to face throughout his journey in order to defeat the final obscale with the aide of the Triforce. I adore how in the first 3 windows there is a different Goddess aiding him depending on the adversary. Even though it's them who granted the divine powers to the Triforce users, sia good or bad, they somehow get ignored through most of the games except in certain dialouges. I think people know more about how the Triforce is formed in 3 pieces rather than the 3 who actually created it. LOL, the irony. On the fourth one there is Link fighting the storm (Ganondorf?) face to face along with the help of a girl with holy powers (who most probably is Tingle XDD). The fifth and final one is the most symbolic, much like the actual Zelda games. Link is with his sword raised above the heavens, meaning that either he's charging the storm above him to a challenge or he is rising his sword in victory against it. Also, the Triforce could mean two things. One, it definitly symbolises the 3 Goddesses who created the Triforce in their respective elements, Wisdom, Power and Courage. Also, with Link being the chosen hero facing the storm with courage, the powerful storm being Ganondorf facing Link with confidence and fearsomeness, and with the light streaming around the Triforce with knowlege about it, it could mean one thing: that the 3 pieces of the Triforce are going to clash up to a climatic battle at a certain point, and when that will happen, the Triforce will become whole once again. Either that, or I'm too deep. Can't wait to see what will happen next! :3
| Title: Update APAP!!!
Reviewed By: Gizzaz On: September 22, 2007 18:18 CDT
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Enter the vicked victhes, Koume and Kotake! I really hoped that they'll appear soon enough throughout the story, even if just a little. Not that I'm a fan of theirs, but I really do enjoy fighting against them in LoZ games, they're quite a challange despite them being old ladies!-Errr, no offence Koume and Kotake...^_^''' Fire and Ice combined with perfect co-ordination and aged wisdom surprisingly leaves you quite badly hurt indeed, no matter how many lives one's got. And if you think in OoT lines, it was them who raised Ganon(dorf) to become the famous Zelda villian that he has become and still is, so no wonder they're something to worry about in the LoZ universe. And with your perspective of the LoZ universe, they're 10x even more troublesome and powerful than in the actual game. Can't wait to see more evil coming! Some hope that Vaati will pop out somehow? (Can't wait to see more of Link too, of course! That cliffhanger at the end is a bugger! XO)
| Reviewed By: Tobito On: September 22, 2007 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Lord. This Zelda story is absolutly amazing. I'm not saying this out of kindness because you're quite famous with your golden Inuyasha fictions. I'm saying this because it IS ABSOLUTLY A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. I'm not that of a Zelda fan, heck, I'm not even a gamer to begin with, but after reading your story, I got so inspired from it that I actually Wikipeadiad to know what exactly Legend of Zelda was all about, saw many Zelda game clips from "Ocrania of Time" (pardon my bad game title-spelling) to "Wind Waker" on YouTube, and bought "The Legend of Zelda-Twilght Princess" Wii game for the sake of actually owning something about that wonderful universe, even though I probably couldn't play it due to not owning a Wii console or having any relatives owning it. No matter though, I'll still conserve it for that time when I'll somehow get enough cash to own that expensive console. Meanwhile, I have to say again that the story is pretty good, and the characters are so well-developed that I could almost see them materielaze in real people. Yes, I know that witches don't exist, and yes, I know that Link doesn't speak, but come on, how could a hero(ine) be a hero without having to pass through inner struggles and without having self-doubt, even if for just a little bit? The Zelda story is great, but it's nice to add a such realistic hero that doesn't just swing around his sword, roll around the country and stays mute for anything said to him. For that, I applaud you. I look foward for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Leo the Great On: September 13, 2007 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit you can write! ~grovels in your aurthorly awesomeness~ I LOVED this story and its possibly the best story, bond or unbond, that I have ever read (and I read alot.) You need to get paid for this, seriously. Hell I think this story is giving me a greater appreciation to the whole Zelda series since now you have given the series a 'how it all started.' (Heh heh I had forgotten about the pink bunny, at first I thought it was a some sort of twisted humor, but then I remembered it was from LttP; from a moment it gave my a good WTF?!? feeling lol.) Oh and one more VERY important thing...... Post again ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~fangirl squeals and runs off to reread~ lol
| Reviewed By: Gerwiedlow On: September 10, 2007 04:52 CDT
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Please update this story soon! I prefare it more than your other Inuyasha fics! It's really good!
| Reviewed By: OInin On: September 10, 2007 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is THE best Zelda fic I have ever read for years! I would love to see more chapters, this story is a masterpiece! :D
| Reviewed By: Hyena On: September 06, 2007 04:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUPPPDDDDDAAAAATTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE please!
| Reviewed By: Refille On: September 06, 2007 04:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You take a complete different perspective of the Legend of Zelda, and this perspective is amazing. Sheik is given a more tactical and mercenary figure than just the mysterious figure that the Game gives up. And Link definitly is a more developed person than just being the untalking Hero of the month. This Link is more human and reacts like so, and even has his weak moments to boot. And that's really rare in LoZ fics, in both Link and Sheik development. Please update soon whenever you can, becuase this is the best Zelda story I have ever read so far.
| Reviewed By: Lunais On: September 06, 2007 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The latest chapter is absolutley breath-taking. You can FEEL Link's struggles and tension around him during battles and when he gets lost at what to do next. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 18:16 CDT
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I'd like you to know that this is probably one of the best fics I have read in the last year in any fandom. You have a great deal of talent when wielding action and humor as your swords and you are very creative in your use of tension...in a good way creative, even though I kind of want to throw things at you for ending there. You blend the worlds of the games beautifully and make the story and characters both accessible and lovable to die hard fans and people looking for an exciting read. I can assure you that the update notice in my inbox for this piece was one of the highlights of my day and I cannot wait to read more. Happy writing =)
| Title: awsome as always
Reviewed By: Sanjiyan3x3 On: August 13, 2007 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up i would love to see more chapters up soon this has become one of my fav. fictions for zelda series
| Reviewed By: Zeldagis On: August 10, 2007 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as always. Also mean as always. You're good as always.
| Reviewed By: Daiyanna Grae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 21:34 CDT
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WHAT! I hate you now. (I have absolutly NO knowledge of the LOZ 'vers) That was just MEAN. But I'll still be watching for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Daiyanna Grae [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am SO in love with this story! I had never been interested in the LOZ universe before finding this foc, but reading it makes me want to play it now... Good work! Please update soon! Daiyanna Grae
| Reviewed By: moonlit_child@hotmail.com On: April 22, 2007 10:35 CDT
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Update soooooon!
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