| "Daddy's back and ready for love" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: seiya12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry and update this fanfic 18 days is quite long.This is very good and getting to interesting!!
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Title: Ill write as many reviews as u want!!
Reviewed By: Satsuskae1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, ur story totally rox all sox, and ill do anything it takes to make u finish it! im gonna tell all my friends to read it and review! u gotta continue it, i wanna see if Inu Taisho(inuyasha+seshomarus daddy) gets laid by Kagome. And im probally guessing that Sota, Sangos little brother is sitting on her bed. Plus i want to see if Lady Saya and Seshomaru hit it off!!! xD But i have 1 question, will Kikiyo have inuyashas baby? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE (ext. ext) CONTINUE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome work plz update soon I wanna know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: seiya12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good keep the good work. And i think you should just give Kouga a good pounding!
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Reviewed By: Rebecca the priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont kill him, but maybe have Inu tashio tackle him and the ask him for his surrender or he may choose death. Kouga will sigh choose surender and then promise loylaty to the inu clan. Wonderful story so far, your doing lovley with the inu kag relashionship. Maybe a little more charcter devlopment and longer chapters? but i understand you have a life. Keep up the good work i love this paring, and i belive ull do it justice!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 17:10 CDT
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no freakin way jakotsu?
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Title: Daddys back and ready for love
Reviewed By: sessyfan101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 15:31 CDT
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Not really what u could do, u could kill him but then he and Kagome are friends, so maybe u should have him beat up so that he drops his claim.
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Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Don't kill Kouga cuz then Kagome might suffer cuz he is her friend after all. You could injure him very badly and he would just give up his wanting to claim Kagome. But its your story.
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Title: Daddys back and ready for love
Reviewed By: sessyfan101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good, the whole Miroku and Jank thing was a nice touch. Add a lemon when you want it won't really matter when. update soon can't wait to read the next chapter
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Title: Rauko_Arisha
Reviewed By: Rauko_Arisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is awesome. it's not too soon for a lemon and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
U have a few grammar mistakes but they're easily fixed. As for the story its awesome u should but a lemon soon, and the turn out that Miroku is gay priceless keep writing your great at it. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: seiya12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luvvvvvv this story definitely better than the same Inuyasha Kagome or even Sesshoumaru Kagome fanfics! Please keep up the good work!!
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Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love it except for the inuyasha kikyo thing and the sango kyo thing i think it should be kag/inu/sessh/kyo/inu taisho and miro/sango the it would be the best story ever written oh and don't forget about our favorite wolf koga ok thanx for updating bya's
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Reviewed By: wsrussel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh!! i love inutaishio x kagome stories they're just soo very sexy!!!! will there be lemons?! please say there will!! anyway please up date very very soon!! ja ne!
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