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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 11:42 EST
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Et tu, Brute? lol, took me a little while to figure it out. God I'm slow. Anyway, so is this the end? Wow. Then Sango's revelation she slept with Naraku which started this whole mess O_o. It looks like Naraku is gone but the battle is far from over with the Seven still sticking around. Good work.
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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 02:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
And now for something completely different. Which it was. ^^ What, Kagome and Inuyasha didn't have to do a thing? I'm slightly disappointed. =) Well, there may still be some clean up to do. I've forgotten, does Sesshomaru still have Tensaiga? Kikyou ought to be able to be saved once the smoke clears, if that's the case.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 00:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF? Naraku turned into Julius Caesar? LOL, careful what you wish for. Really can't wait to see the next chapter. Is Kikyou going to stay dead? I would've loved to have seen her face at the realization that Sesshoumaru wasn't human. I guess if you are planning on reviving her, then that'll definitely be a face to remember when she finds out that way, but if it's your plans to leave her dead I'm sure I'll get over it. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: mysterie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 20:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story, love all of your stories. This one has been a wonderful ride. I guess the keyword in his wish is "I were the most powerful and feared man in the land!" no? Lol. Thanks for this great read!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'VE BEEN READING THIS STORY SINCE THE BEGINNING!!! ITZ STILL AWSOME AS I REMEBER!!!PLZ CONTINUE DON'T JUST LEAVE US HAGIN THERE PLZ!!! N I THINK U R AN AWSOME AUTHOR!!!!
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 18:00 EST
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Very exciting. Wasn't expecting Kikyou to get whacked.
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 17:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, and I dunno if anyone is as much of a dork as I am but I looked up "et tu, brute". If you wanna know what it means go and google or wikipedia it.
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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 04:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, the climatic chapter has finally come? Sesshomaru's mom just watching? She is something of a cold fish. So, enough of the evil mastermind gloating, it's time for the forces of good and justice to triumph! =)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 11:44 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku is dead meat and doesn't even know it yet. He has a pissed Sesshomaru, a very protective Inuyasha and and a scared and angry Kagome after him at the same time not to mention Sango and Miroku. He doesn't realize the can of hurt he is bringing down on himself. I loved how you portrayed Sesshomaru's mother with her air of seeming disinterest and her waiting for the "fun" to start. What I really like is how you have woven the canon characters into a totally believable and new tapestry pattern. None of the characters have appeared false or OOC with the exception of Sesshomaru not trying to kill Inuyasha at first and Inuyasha acting mature. But that can be explained by the simple expediency of the length of time that this is set from canon, they both grew up. I can't wait to see how the fight scene plays out.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 06:06 EST
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oooo man that was fast paced and intense...cant wait to see what happens and I think that you got sessy mom just right XD way to go...keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 01:24 EST
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Wow! Naraku is such a mean guy. I didn't expect he would come out with the tentacles and everything. It was surprising, but in the good way, lots of action and very exciting. I think this chapter has an amazing rhythm, and I'm glad to know you'll post soon. Looking forward!!
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Title: Keep the Suspense alive!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 23:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I been away for a while. I said this in the beginning, I love this story!!! Things are heating up and I'm loving it. I know you are going to entertain us with more intrigue. So I'll patiently wait for the next installment!!! Peace!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 22:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! Action-packed craziness. I wonder how long Sesshoumaru will lay there pretending to be dead before he realizes he's got no choice but to reveal his youkai-ness... Wonderful cliffy. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Re: Chapter 51: Uninvited
Reviewed By: little25victor [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 20:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Boy, CLIFFIE! I knew it was Sess-Mom, too. But, ARE Rin and Kanna safe? IS Kohaku going to do something terrible?? WILL Sess-Mom nix the marrage???? Please don't leave us in the dark so long this time! (grovels abjectly) I await your next chappie!
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 17:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting battle scene. Nice leaving everyone on the edge of the cliff.
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