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Reviewed By: MissLynx On: May 05, 2010 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm if you can deal with poor grammar then you will have no problems with this story. My suggestion for the author is get a beta to review the story before you post. I can understand that that its hard to review your own work sorry poor grammar is a pet peeve of mine. Otherwise its a cute story
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Reviewed By: inuluver4everhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story. I don't know if you wil or not but it would be really nice to see this story continued. I was thinking though.... do you think that you could look at a story I started and posted on here a long while back but never finished. It started out strong but then I didnt know where to go with it. If you want to its called Feudal Time Horror.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 04:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is Cold Fire: Fatefull meeting ( Chapter 2 ) the first chapter????? where is chapter one???
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Reviewed By: szyszka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 12:46 CST
Comment/Review:
glad u r back:) great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Koyomi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was great. keep it up please
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Welcome back! Lol Kagome is such an oddity sometimes...I would definitely not be analyzing the situation if someone ever did anything that considerate for me!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 (nsi) On: October 08, 2007 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good chapter, so glad you updated!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update. I loved this chapter. I can't wait for more. Wonderfully done. Keep up the terrific work. You are very talented.
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Reviewed By: keekuu On: July 12, 2007 00:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't want her to leave !! She's 18 now so if she wants to she can stay with Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! (can you tell I love this story? :P)
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Title: Yaaay Updates!
Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome updates! Can't wait till you update again (I hope it's soon)
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 11:17 CDT
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lol that was good, awww kaggy is in love
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two chapters, WOW! Thanks! That was a spectacular chapter. I loved it. Such warmth and romance. You are very talented. Keep up the great work. Update soon PLEASE! Sitting on the edge of my seat....almost falling off!
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Reviewed By: Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 12:14 CDT
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awesome update, I always enjoy them.. can't wait for the next one!~
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