| "Living a Lie" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: August 03, 2007 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...I wonder how she'll take everything now that she's awaare of the danger - maybe (hopefully) she won't do anything to rash - hehe then again she's been w/Inu most of her life. Update Soon^_^
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Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 16:46 CDT
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I luv this story. I'm so glade I found it. Usually I stick 2 the authers I know but I'm definitely happy that I decided 2 see some knew talent. Can't wait 4 the next instalment. And if you ever need a beta I'm offerin my services. Until next chappie Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 16:44 CDT
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I luv this story. I'm so glade I found it. Usually I stick 2 the authers I know but I'm definitely happy that I decided 2 see some knew talent. Can't wait 4 the next instalment. And if you ever need a beta I'm offerin my services. Until next chappie Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: July 13, 2007 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I still feel bad for Kikyou - bitch though she may be I think she and Inu just need a 2nd chance (especially if she's learned her lesson);and Miroku - well he'll never learn... Update Soon^^
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Reviewed By: Its Who I Am... On: July 13, 2007 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
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Im really sorry to say that I didnt think that your story was realistic. I mean come on everyone that Kagome knows and trusts kept a life altering secret from her. When you find out something like that you are pissed off at all the people involved. She shouldnt treat her birth parents with open-arms she should feel like they abandoned her (in a way they did). She should feel like she is alone and cant trust anyone. You made her a little too trusting. People she doesnt even know hate her and she is treated like she is dirt. People hate/dislike her because she is a half-breed. She should be madd, confused and most of all untrusting. She is in a different world that she knows nothing about. I will tell you Its not that I DONT like your fic its just I think that it should be more realistic. If you dont get it just let me tell you my parents abandoned me when I was little. I really do like the plot but think that Kagome should be a little more resentful!!!!
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Reviewed By: Its Who I Am On: July 13, 2007 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
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Im really sorry to say that this story really disappointed me. I mean if you just found out that your real parents abandoned you, your not exatically human, its been kept from you your whole life, the people you trusted the most knew about it but instead of trusting you they decided to keep it from you. I mean shyt I would be real real pissed off!! When I did find my real parents I wouldnt be all sappy and so accepting of them. I mean there should be a lot of mistrust between them. Not immediate love. Trust Me I Know. I guess Im not really hating your story but I feel as if it should be a little more realistic. If you dont understant it yet let me just tell you. My parents abandoned me when I was little.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 23:51 CDT
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I love this chapter its sooo cute....Sango and Miroku..awwwwwwwww.....I'm glad Kikyo is not going to the western lands like I said soo alaberatly befor I don't hate her but I don't like her ether basicly stay away from the Inu/Kag paring....XD....I have a question that is kinda worrying me...when Kagome get her weapons....no dought she will get a bow if her miko powers will show up that wouldn't be good so what is she going to do...also what is she going to use for a short ranged weapon I realy cant wait to see what you come up with I just up she doesn't get caught...XD....Ok up date soon Please and thankyou...Nyuka
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay!...this is a koo story....I don't know whay but I'm always a sucker for a good Hanyou story....espeshily one with Kagome as a Hanyou....heheh.....the only think that I have to complain about is...*sniff*...THAT YOU DIDN'T PUT SHIPPO-CHAN IN THE STORY.....*sob*.....Shippo is the cutest little thing ever how could you not put him in your story.....He could like show up at there door step one day as a orphan or something ya can't just leave shippo out of it....he is the Kagomes personaly living teddy bear....he is her comfert when Inuyasha is being a jurk....ya gota right Shippo in he could like save Kagome all of a sudden when she accsedently gets lost, when she was wandering around a forest or something....he may not be that strong but he inspirse Kagome to be strong and have a feeling of someone she needs to protect....Shippo has meny important roles in the group he can't not be there....sigh* but I guess this is your story and nothing I could say would change your mind about not writing Shippo in...Sigh*........Well any why you said you are a Kikyo Hater....I think every one has some kind of hate for her....me personaly in the story I hate her but at the same time I feel sorry for her I meen dissregard the story for a moment and think about her situation.....She was in love and happy and then on that fate full day (at the time) she believe to be betrayed by her love...at this moment Kikyo's love shaterd from a broken heart and that only left a pure emotion of Hate (like they say you have to love be for you can hate)....You end up killing (puting in a sleep) the only person you ever loved and you thought they loved you too...but after that you are to weak to go on and you die with all the pain of a heave heart still lingering on your chest.....then when you are starting you get used to being dead and haveing the darkness all around you ....you are forsed back to a life you dissided you didn't want to remember only to come face to face with the person you once loved....alive be for your eyes....Kikyo must have mixed of love and hate all at only and doesn't know what to do with her self......Now skiping ahead...ya find out this other guy is the cause of your death in the first place and its your fault that he was alive....at this moment you hate your self for letting such and evil guy live..(even if she never showed it)....her pain just keeps adding up...and then the heaviest blow of all... the one you love the one that you came back from the dead for has fallen in love with some other than your self (sorta) your Reicarnation...at this time you feel you are not good enoph, you wish you could have never come back to life, but you hate you reicarnation be cause its like be with you love with out being with them...and that sadden you and you just don't know how to go on....and it is almost as if every one is out to kill you be for you can at least get your revenge for your murder..............sigh* I might have gone a little over board...sorry...hehe...well that is basicly why I feel sorry for Kikyo...but I still hater...hehe..weird hu...well it seems that my hate for her grow with almost every fanfic that I have read....I think almost every one is a Kikyo Hater...poor girl....well any way this is a great story and update it soon because it is a good story...and sorry for being a blaber typer I just keeped going and going....well I've type to much please update soon....Please and thankyou....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: July 11, 2007 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku has come mean the FUN has arrived - I wonder when/if little Shippou and Rin will enter the picture? Update Soon^^
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: July 11, 2007 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku has come mean the FUN has arrived - I wonder when/if little Shippou and Rin will enter the picture? Update Soon^^
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: June 23, 2007 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he, me again 0 rockin new chapter! Update soon^^
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: June 20, 2007 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kikyo and Kagome are half-sisters huh? Interesting twist - update soon.
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Reviewed By: J.A.R. On: June 09, 2007 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope thate you do more of thise stowe and fineising it soon so we can finding out aboute her past
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Reviewed By: hime kagome28 On: June 09, 2007 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want to read more !!!! update more!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
looks good so far please update soon
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