| "Heart's Treasures" Reviews/Comments [ 199 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fireheart [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 12:50 CST
Comment/Review:
AWWW HOW COULD U BE SO CRUEL?? YOU STOPPED RIGHT AT THE RIGHT PLACE!!! Oh well, I'll wait until next time! PLease continue!!!! |
Reviewed By: black crow On: February 01, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello there, this is my first review in this site even when I have been visiting this site for two whole years, and I´m glad to say that I have finally found a fanfic worth of reviewing (I´m kinda exigent). But now, talking about the story I need to say that my opinion is just the same as the one that have the other reviewers. The way you tell the story, the way you show the diferents situations and feelings of the characters is unique. I can practically see them in my head, and when you think that all this was based in a fairy tale one really can see all the work that you had put on this. Finally, I have to say one more thing: If you really need reviews to continue with this beautiful story, you can have for sure that you will see the name "black crow" in the future. |
Reviewed By: Corel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already rated once, no need to do so again. Another chapter! It was great! Better than the proceeding chapters even. It just keeps getting better and better! Your story is amazing and I know how hard it is to take an existing simple story and make it accord with the characters and where they come from and everything. Not to mention it takes a great deal of originality and thinking to put each scene in detail and explain it so the reader feels like they're actually there. I love storys that take place in kingdoms and far away places and such, otherwise said, fairy tales. But your story takes fairy tales to a new level. Your style seems alot like Robin Mckinley's and she's one of my favorite authors of all times. She too can take a teeny story and turn it into something incredible. I just wanted to say that the story's great and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. If it wasn't for storys like yours, I'd give up fan-reading all together, but you and some others are what keep hope alive. All this to say I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: litlleniegenie On: January 27, 2003 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!!! its soo awesome!! i hope you update it soon again...i read it for the first time a couple weeks ago and i loved it then too. i also love the fact that you based it off of a fairy tale. and you have cardcaptor sakura characters acting it out with your own little twist to it. |
Reviewed By: litlleniegenie On: January 27, 2003 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!!! its soo awesome!! i hope you update it soon again...i read it for the frist time a couple weeks ago and i loved it then too. i also love the fact that you based it off of a fairy tale. and you have cardcaptor sakura characters acting it out with your own little twist to it. |
Reviewed By: Aerith_Leonheart On: January 27, 2003 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! It's an awesome story! I can't wait for the next chappie;) So please write faster! It's totally awesome!
~Aerith |
Reviewed By: Nekocin On: January 27, 2003 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! You've updated. That was a good chapter too, but you've misspelled Yamazaki's girlfriend's name. Her name is Chiharu. :) But don't be mad actually I know what you mean about that, the story is getting good, please update!!! |
Reviewed By: kawaiigrl On: January 22, 2003 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konichiwa!
THIS FAN FIC SO SUGOI!!!!!! The characters and the plot is strong. I'm really impressed. This is the first story that I've seen with a hundred reviews (well...101 if you add mine...^^;) Anyhoo, I really enjoyed this story and hope that you finished it soon! Right guys? * every reviewer nodds their head* SEE!? You are damn good at writing! Keep up the good work! ^.~
B :)
P.S. I wanted to put the enjoyment factor bar at 100 but the damn thing dosen't go that high...*sigh* |
Reviewed By: Kay [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE TO DO ANOTHER CHAPTER! I love this story and I really want to know the rest. PLEASE, please write more. |
Reviewed By: Mei-Hua (from ffn) On: January 14, 2003 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fic! i have never heard of the story thousand furs but now after your story i think i will hunt it up and see if the original version is as sweet as urs. oh yeah... eriol has blue hair! not black! i kno it sounds more natural black.. but i am quite fond of it staying blue cuz its his unique style. :) ne wayz, i love ur story and jus review to say dat u did a really great job on this!! :) |
Reviewed By: Mei-Hua (from ffn) On: January 14, 2003 05:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fic! i have never heard of the story thousand furs but now after your story i think i will hunt it up and see if the original version is as sweet as urs. oh yeah... eriol has blue hair! not black! i kno it sounds more natural black.. but i am quite fond of it staying blue cuz its his unique style. :) ne wayz, i love ur story and jus review to say dat u did a really great job on this!! :) |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heya! This is one cute story. I've been trying to review the whole afternoon, but my internet service was getting weird.
Okay... I like your style of writing that's why the 10. It's a going with the flow kind a fic. Like for example when some parts are explained from the other's POV.
The spelling... some of your English IS kinda hard to understand... I mean the grammar, that's why the 7. But they weren't spoiling my curiosity for the next chapters. And... Syaoran's mother's name is spelled "Yelan"
The creativity is 9, because it's sort of your way of writing Thousand furs, I presume. Although some of the chapters (E+T chapter) was just added for the plot, right?
Enjoyment is 10. Yes, you got it! I've enjoyed it... VERY stunning. I gasped when I read the chapters.
I STILL want to know how you'll continue! I'm begging you... Please send more!!!! It was getting SOO GOOD! |
Reviewed By: Lia On: January 07, 2003 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It`s amazing!!, i have reviewed it earlier and just by reading a new chapter i believe you DESERVES to be thanked. I sincerly think this a great fic, please finish it soon, i believe is the best Sakura&Syaoran fic I have read so please continue!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ~*angel*~ On: January 02, 2003 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ~*Mei Yen*~ On: December 30, 2002 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update ASAP! (opps! i'm sorry!!! my overall ratin is not 5. dat's y i'm reviewin again...i'm very sorry! u've got a great story!!!)
UPDATE SOON! |
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