| "Fall of the Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angelina Bowden On: October 22, 2002 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
even thought ch. 29 was short from your preveious ones I thought it was funny and good. |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just curious if you'd ever let goku get pregnant again anytime in the future or near the closure of the story, however long that may take.. just a question. Anyway, I'm glad to that Vegeta is whipping Spice into shape she was drinking to much... *lol* I'm glad that Veggie is more relaxed and he seems very happy to be with Kakarotto. In the previous chapter, I really loved the part when he held Kakarotto, allowing the other saiyan to finally let go of his pain over the loss of his child. Overall, everything is turning out fine. I can't wait to see what happens next!!! |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoo hoo more for me to read
i love this fic it is the beast
keep writing you do it so well |
Reviewed By: Hard Candy Vegetto On: October 18, 2002 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's right! Spice needs a good kick in the butt! it's time for her to get over herself.
By the way... damn... I would be REALLY disturbed if my dad was kissing his....man in from of me on the floor like that.... *shivers in the corner* |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 21:52 CDT
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*poke poke* Write more 'bout Vegeta. *poke*
;)
Review 51! Go me! |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems that I haven't left a review in quite a while. Well, I must tell you, overall, I'm very pleased with what you've done so far. I'm still really bummed about the loss of the baby though. *Sad sigh* guess that's just how things go... But hell, won't it be fun when Vegeta finds his Kaky good and drunk? *giggles* I wonder what fun that'll bring. |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* You had me all choked up once again! Spice needs to reconcile with Gohan. Without her mother there, she will need her father, no matter how mad she is at him right now. At the moment, she's using Vegeta as a surrogate, but eventually she will need to go back to her real father.
Vegeta still doesn't know about the miscarrige yet, does he? He's gonna want to kill Gohan for real when he does. How will Goku prevent it? Will he fight his mate to protect his son? Hmm... I sense some good angst coming up. :) |
Reviewed By: OddBallSlasher On: September 26, 2002 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh it was going good till chapter ten...(if u havent noticed u lost a lot of readers there)and contrary to popular belief it not that readers are jealous of the girls in the fic...its just that they tend to SERIOUSLY grate on our nerves. especially mine. now im NOT trying to be mean, i know I hate it when people just rant and rave and are totally inconsiderate to me ^_^ im just telling yah like it is! i personally thought it was almost perfect till all the girls started showing all over the place, in fact i think it was just that there were too many original characters although it would have helped if there were more boys and self-inserts klinda turn me off to a fic... but i still enjoyed the ficcie! |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too bad for the guys... it's terrible to lose the baby, but it's easier than explaining exactly what is Goku's birth canal.... i mean come on... but i think i feel worse for Gohan than anyone this time around. he's confused and alone. his own daughter is disowning him... yeah he's stuck up and all, but she's just a little more than your usual ungrateful young adult. She's kind of a hypocrite that way. she's pretty judgemental herself. i'm her age. in school too. i pay for it myself and i'm still not ungrateful like her. i like spice, but she's gone a little too far. |
Reviewed By: SoccerVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 19:58 CDT
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Hey! It's me yaoi ashes! Heh heh heh! I abso-fucking-lutely loved it! And of course I loved the author's notes at the end! *grins* And you used my ideas! That's my favorite part! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! Maybe Piccolo will reveal some hidden attraction? Spice go crazy? Gohan find his true sexuality?! More, more, more! |
Reviewed By: knightwulfash On: September 19, 2002 19:22 CDT
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great twist in ch22 sucks for the family but hey great for a good story. this is definitly one of my favorite fanfics. |
Reviewed By: Blood Roses On: September 18, 2002 13:54 CDT
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Heh... so this is going to be a Piccolo and Gohan fic as well?
Kind of disappointing, the Goku miscarriage I mean. It's going to disappoint a lot of fans. But it also adds a lot of angst to the story and makes it a bit more distinguished than if you would have went along with the stereo-typical happy factor that most sheep (prep or uninventive, uncreative people) would have gone with. Heh, very interesting. I want to see where you are going with this. |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! I didn't think you'd take my suggestion about losing the baby seriously! *sniff* And poor Spice! What's she gonna do now? This story seems like it's turning more into her tale than Vegeta and Goku's. Hm. I guess next chapter we'll get Vegeta's reaction to the news, huh? Ouch. Can't wait to see it! |
Reviewed By: kia On: September 17, 2002 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*griiins* whoo! your story just gets wilder and wilder. drama-mama! ok, i don't often come to mediaminer.org, but just for you.....*lol* |
Reviewed By: chibi_vegeta On: September 17, 2002 18:47 CDT
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well fuuuuuuck...*folds arms..tail lashing*...damn rogue...*grins hugely*...fucking a...get your ass moving on this!...it went from being someone hesitant at the beginning yet it now plowing everything aside...cripes...the angst has to have xe pre-orgasmic...*snickers* |
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