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Reviewed By: sessh's_luver On: June 04, 2008 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so freakin CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luved it 2 much 2 even say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Katp On: October 07, 2007 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so sweet...i like the way you have Inuyasha handle the issue with Kikyo in a mature fashion. I am also reading you other stories and they are very good.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sans typos this story is lovely. there are too few reviews for a story of this caliber. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 17:54 CDT
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wonderful story... really enjoyed it... great job... good work...
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Reviewed By: Katana Kiba On: July 08, 2007 11:17 CDT
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Very good fic! Loved it!And just to let you know- coat= haori belt= obi pants= hakama Common words- kami= god gomen= your pardon/sorry katana=sword osuwari= sit Honorifics are optional but recommended. They make your work sound even better than it already is! Katana : )
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 02:29 CDT
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that was adorable. So sweet, it was gooey with a sugar coating. I loved it so much. I hope you continue to write, I look forward to everything you come up with. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 10:11 CDT
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That was fun and I really enjoyed it!!
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 02:18 CDT
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alot better then most people's
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Reviewed By: Dragon Rider [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAA-M-AAAAAAAA-ZING!!!!!!!! its alot better than my first fanfic.*grummbles* lucky. nice work though and three words of advice. keep. it. up!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_~ -mikoofdoom
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
liked the story. Not bad for a first piece. Congratulations!!!! Waff - a term used when referring to yaoi/yuri fanfics that are more sentimental and mushy romance than all-out well you get the point. PWP - porn without a plot (as if there is such a thing, plot hah) Don't worry too much on the correct terms for the clothing. A minute part of the story. If it is so dang needed then google it. The spacing is needed so we the readers don't get a headache reading. It's a big turn off. You have a lot of hits but no reviews because of it. Also as a writer it's easier to give descriptions and dialogs with smaller paragraphs. Hope I answered your questions. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:21 CDT
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Very, very sweet...and I liked it a lot!
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a wonderful first piece. You are very talented. I loved this story, but you must continue as they never kissed yet. You would do great I know it!!! Keep up the terrific work. Definitions you asked: ***PWP: Porn Without Plot OR Plot? What Plot? **WAFF: Warm and Fuzzy Feeling (applied to stories which are intended to invoke those feelings in the reader.)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. I'm surprised to hear you say that it was your first story; well done. It's clear to me that you know what you're doing when it comes to composing a piece of literature. You may be unfamiliar with Japanese terminology, but you grasp the rules of "English" like a professional writer, and believe me, there's a lot of amateurs out there. I think the formatting was fine, and the plot was cute. As for the fanfic abbreviations you asked about, WAFF stands for "warm and fuzzy feeling" and is used to refer to cherished, heartfelt moments, such as your story, while PWP I've seen people translate as either "porn without plot" or more comically, "Plot? What plot?" Either way, it refers to stories that more or less just arrange a quick way for the characters to get down and dirty, whether or not the circumstances surrounding the "plot" really seem all that plausible. If you have any other questions, or would like a quick run down of some of the more popular Japanese words often thrown into fanfic stories, please feel free to contact me directly.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 16:03 CDT
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Very nice. Warm and sweet at the same time. A lovely weekend treat. You have a good 'voice', very enjoyable to read. Please, continue writing. WAFF= warm and fuzzy feelings; PWP= pointless work of porn, both of which are excellent, and absolutely dynamite together. ;P
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