| "Valiant Champion Or Something Like It" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: loves fluff On: May 09, 2012 00:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a wonderfuly writen story here. The over all feel sugests to me that it could have happened withen cannon, even the sex as it was hinted at through out the anime. On the subject of sex, those sceans were what didn't get a 10 out of the enjoyment factor. It wasn't that they were bad sceans just comparatively to the rest of the wrighting they seemed sort of lacking...that makes it sound like they weren't fun to read which they were. Well enough about that, The point of this review was to say that I loved the series you chose to write about and wished there were more poeple who would be willing to write fanfiction about Rune Soldier for I belive it was an exclent series. On a side note if you can fine the ten or so volumes of the Manga/light novel you will find that your Louie is more in cannon with the writen hero then the bumbline mage the anime makes him out to be. I hope to see more Rune Soldier in the futrue, maybe a retelling of the story frome the begining it would certianly give you more leway in the relationship development. :D |
Title: WIN
Reviewed By: White Knight Leo On: February 01, 2009 12:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellently written. I love your work.
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Title: 1-10
Reviewed By: Srednasnhoj On: March 13, 2008 15:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job again Alpha-Zulu! I am very impressed with your works to date with the exception of the Negi one. It just isn't my taste in the way of pornography for a boy that young being sexually active. But on to other things. Great plot line with this and I'm amazed with how you have such a wide range of anime that you write about. I do wonder if you are going to be writing anything else about this series and I do hope you do. Keep up the good work and take care!
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Reviewed By: A Reviewer On: January 08, 2008 02:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm thrilled beyond words to see a Louie fic. Especially one that is well written, smutty and really long. It didn't contain nearly as much humor as the series, but considering that a lot of the gags were either visual, or Louie doing something stupid, it's certainly excusable. I was also pleased by how mostly light hearted and warm the general tone of the story was. The ending was particularly amusing and I can see that being the exact way Louie gets married were it to have been worked into the series. Maybe not the girl (kinda hard to say who they'd pick in the end, yeah?) but the circumstances, yeah. Incredibly entertaining and generally true to the spirit of the original. A very well done project.
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Reviewed By: Soth12 On: December 31, 2007 03:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very impressed with your story. The style and the format were an easy read. I am a fan of lemon series fanficion when it has a good story behind it, and yours was a very good creative and beliveable story that followed the anime extremely well.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Godslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 18:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the Rune Soldier anime and I have always been suprised at the lack of fanfiction for it. This was quite the excellent piece of work, and I appreciate the time and effort it must have taken you to write it. It was an expertly written, involving story.
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Reviewed By: gelionlegend1 On: July 21, 2007 20:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
i like it more so that Louie is getting it on with the girls at last. ido hope you continue this story as i have enjoyed reading this with the lemon scenes of the girls. though i do wonder if he will get ila(forgot the spelling sorry) plus the long eared elf-girl, that and what will the consequences be for all the screwing he has done. Isabelle well it would be god if she did marry the prince plus maybe he does become her champion. another thing i would like to see would most likely be another story set at the beginning with louie getting not only the four girls, melissa, merril, genia, ila, isabelle and the long eared elf-girl. though the advetures of him bedding them would be good but the fact that he is much smarter than he looks and just plays at being dumb and weak using weapons but is really very good at magic at the same level or greater than cawless or just able to different forms of magic with or without the mediums or ingredents. with pregnancy abound if he isn't careful when doing it, though you could throw in another series or game to give him an enemy to fight like diablo. well i hope to see more of this story and have a think on that other one so i'll see it soon. tanks for the great story.
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Title: Finally, LRS Fanfic
Reviewed By: Terdwilicker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 13:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very pleased that someone finally wrote a Louie the Rune Soldier Fanfic. I'm even more pleased that its a continuation lemon. And most pleased as to whom is writing it. Louie seems a little out of character, suddenly gaining competence when before he had luck and brute force. Its a little jarring but I'll roll with it. Spelling errors I noticed: tombs should be tomes artisan should be artesian Looking forward to more, hopefully with some explanation as to Louie suddenly gaining some "1337 5k!11z0rz". I really like where you're going with Ila as his destined girl.
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