| "Our Lives in the Hurricane Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Title: oh please hurry!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 13:01 EST
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please hurry with the next chapter soon! i'm DYING!!!! i wanna know what's gonna happen between mayu and oro-bastard and naruto!
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Title: plz udate!!!!
Reviewed By: kiwi_mist_96 On: November 26, 2007 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude! Yo writin' is pimpin! and also, i wanna know wat'll happen between SasuxMayu! They are such a sweet couple, and i really hope they get back together. oh and is Mayu taken by Itachi-de-hottie. i really think ita-san is awesome, but only in your story. but, anyways, update soon! there is a site i'll give you to find the Naruto manga, ya have ta check it out. www.onemanga.com You'll be able to update soon after you finish reading most of the mange!!!
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Title: shit...
Reviewed By: MoonAngel_8 On: November 16, 2007 17:20 EST
Comment/Review:
i forgot my fucking password....shit............. anywayz, i REALLY gotta know about Yasmine's past NOW!!!! i think she's related to Mayu!! Hehehehehe! But seriously, plz make a chappy about her past or something!!! update soon before i die!! ^^
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Title: not logged on again...
Reviewed By: MoonAngel_8 On: November 14, 2007 17:46 EST
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"...I'm gonna kick your ass...from here to right over there...Yeah, motherfucka!" That was FUNNY!!!!! Mayu is mad krazy! Anywho...plz make a chappy with mayu going to the sand and seeing gaa-chan~! Also, plz write more about sasuXmayu relation ship and her family! i wanna know what's going on! And Did Mayu try to commit suicide with Theresa's PILLS?! gimme the exact 411 on that one!! UPDATE SOON, I ALMOST DIED WAITING...!!
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Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"WHY IS THAT PLACE THE FIRST THING A MAN GRABS?! STOP! TOUCHING! ME!": Mayu/Deidara That's my fav qoute cuase it's funny and true. If a guy were in a womans body that's what he'd do ><
UPDATE! WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: kwl4kids [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 16:00 EDT
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I love you fan fic
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Reviewed By: kwl4kids2 On: October 14, 2007 15:41 EDT
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You know....I love you....... huh yea and if you keep writing I'll like you.....
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Title: hey!!
Reviewed By: MoonAngel_8 On: October 12, 2007 20:17 EDT
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it's still me MoonAngel8, just not logged on!! MY fave quote was, "Eat shit and choke!" IT WAS SOOOO FUNNY!!!! Ino wuz hilarious!!! And I know what Gaara said to Ino! He said he loves Mayu or at least something related to that!! I got ya now!!
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Title: YAY!!!!!!
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOOO!!!!!! When Naru, Ino, and Mayu started yellin at Deidara to get off of Gaara, I wuz rollin!!!!!!That was SOOOO funny!!! Deidara duz look like a male Ino tho.... ANYWAYZ, Plz update soon!! I wanna know what happens bewteen Gaara and Mayu and Sasuke!!! And also Naru and Hina. Why wuz she mad or so they say???
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Reviewed By: kwl4kids2 On: September 28, 2007 18:22 EDT
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I Love this!!!!!!!! Plz I hope Mayu and sasuke get together again! I'm your biggest fan........really
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Reviewed By: kwl4kids2 On: September 24, 2007 21:59 EDT
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Your chap was good. PLZ Write more and more and more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it
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Title: oh shit!
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 20:25 EDT
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damn!!!! mayu got the stuff!!!! where the heck did she learn chidori from?!? oh my gawd!!!!!! i wish i was mayu!! u gotta update soon dammit!!!!!!!!! skool is just around the friggin corner!! And mayu curses A LOT. she MUST be mad! 'your ass is grass'??? WTF?! What duz that mean?!
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Title: Beautiful Girls Remix
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 20:53 EDT
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Damn all these cool fanfictions!!They all just become addictions!!They'll have you suicidal, suicidal!!When the author stops the story! THIS IS MY REMIX OF BEAUTIFUL GIRLS BY SEAN KINGSTION WHICH I KNOW NAME COOL FANFICTIONS!! XD
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Title: aw c'mon!!!
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 15:40 EDT
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when gaara is dying and shukaku is being taken out, it would be a good idea if he saw Mayu as a conscious that saw him as someone important instead of only himself! just saying...hope it helps!! NEVA GIT WRITERS BLOCK!!!!!NEVAAAAA!!!!!!
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Title: WOOHOO-aw....
Reviewed By: MoonAngel_8 On: August 13, 2007 17:11 EDT
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I'm SOOOOOOOO GLAD u updated and all but now i'm all depressed cuz u left a mini cliffy!! T.T PLEASE let Mayu change and get back to Sasuke!! I'm all 4 SasuMayu now!!!!!!PUH-PUH-PUHLEASE!!! UPDATE SOON DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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