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Reviewed By: Doggy Kun On: October 22, 2007 23:39 EDT
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I am sorry about your brother, I hope feel gets better soon. Those were some nasty words Shunn said to Kagome Ouch but I guess that can happen when you are drunk. Please update when you can!
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Reviewed By: Gome'Chan30 On: October 22, 2007 01:51 EDT
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I don't think the reviewer was implying that you copied those words I think what the reviewer was trying to say was that they thought then made music line but saw that someone beat them to the punch so I wouldn't be to harsh but anyway I think I see why Shun acts the way he does he still believes his old fling and Inuyasha did something and believes Inuyasha & Kagome are getting a little to cozy for his liking. Boy thoough did he sure act like the biggest asshole on the planet in this chapte I don't know how Kagome could stay with him after he said all the nasty things that he did he really needs to seek professional help. Your the best! P.S. Sorry to hear about your brother That can't really be tough I had a brother who had a sports hernia and it took forever after surgery for him to get back to tip top shape so if it takes you a little longer to write and upload the next chapter I completely understand I am a patient girl my blessings are with you and your family.
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Reviewed By: Gman119 On: October 22, 2007 01:42 EDT
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I Think Kagome should dump Shunn just for the way she was treated in this chapter what an ass. As always Brilliant!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 06:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*breaths in and out slowly* WHY END IT THERE!!!! WHY!!!!!!!!??????
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 18:30 EDT
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never said you did... just saying that the words i made up when i was 11 was the same as the words from whoever that artist was.. which means that even though I DID think of it, i wont get credit cuz that other guy thot of it before i did.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 19:15 EDT
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Listen to my heart, can you hear it sings Telling me to give you everything Seasons may change, winter to spring But I love you until the end of time Come what may Come what may I will love you until my dying day i am so depressed... I made that up in 5th grade.. and now i find out its not even MINE ><
woe is me.... they were the EXACT SAME WORDS! i dont even know what that song IS....
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... kinda funny but sweet... seems kagome is getting closer to inuyasha... shun is just stupid... wonder what will happen next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: jewel78 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I simply love this story! Please update soon. Don't leave me hanging like so many other writers here. I haven't written any stories but I love to read other people work, but I hate when the story is getting so good and BAM!!! They stop updating or just never complete the story period. I have fallen in love with this story and I strong urge you to complete it, because I'm in it too deep. And, I love your writing style, so please, keep up the wonderful work!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 06:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA i cant get over it! Kagome stabbed him with a pen!?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA thats a pissa!! and awww their love it slowly growing XD
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Reviewed By: Huma Khan On: October 01, 2007 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Am In Love. *Drool*
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Reviewed By: Gome'Chan30 On: September 30, 2007 02:26 EDT
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Sesshomaru playing matchmaker for his brother now that is a sight to see but he does have a point Kagome is to much woman for Shun and just right for Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Strawberryshigh On: September 30, 2007 02:24 EDT
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Good job now all you have to do is get them into the sack, I get the feeling that you know how to write some steamy sex scenes but until then I will just enjoy you marvelous writing.
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Reviewed By: Hanyou2525 On: September 30, 2007 02:22 EDT
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I just got onto the site and saw that my favorite story just got updated so you get a big hug from me because I just can't stop reading your excellent story.
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Reviewed By: Gman119 On: September 30, 2007 02:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started laughing when Kagome said she stabbed the son with a pencil in his Balls, I could just picture Inuyasha face when he heard that. Good Work!
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Reviewed By: Ick-Dog2626 On: September 29, 2007 17:30 EDT
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I was surprised Inuyasha didn't kick the crap out Mr. Slutda I thought for sure he was going to for saying Discrimatory remarks about Kagome and Her Company. As Always it was wonderful.
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