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| "The Three Demons of Konoha" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I THINK HE SHOUND HAVE A BLOODLINE (OR KEKKEI GENKAI)BUT THE FOX MAKES IT WHERE HE CAN'T USE IT BUT HIS SON CAN
| Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go origanal.for naruto make it tenten or tayuya,for sasuke ,a female sai or gay
| Title: Authors note questions
Reviewed By: Sean-San...Again On: February 10, 2008 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1. I'm 99% certain I'm going to make this a Naruto/Hinata pairing. Should I make Naruto monogamous, or should I use the old "Rebuilding a clan" excuse for a harem? 2. Who should Sasuke be paired with? We have the usual suspects of Konoha, a female surviving Haku, and Temari of the Sand. Any other suggestions? Harem or No? 3. Should Naruto have a bloodline ability? If so what kind? 4. I'm thinking that Naruto begins to study seals, Sasuke takes an interest in creating new jutsu, and Hinata creates poisons and other chemicals in their "off duty" time. Do you think they should take a second or possibly more levels of specialization? Please specify what exactly you have in mind A:Maybe have him try both at first, like a three some with hinata and ____ and then go off of what the reviewers think B:Sasuke, I think, Should be paired, with the completely left out, and probably, for a good reason, Sakura or Ten-ten, if not, then Ino C:Naruto should have a blood line, It should give him fox like charactoristics (Ears/tail/whiskeres (Already got them)Ect. D:I think Sasuke should do....Maybe new jutsu, And Genjutsu Naruto:Seals/New Jutsu Hinata: Medicans/New Byakugan abilitys/taijutsu for byakugan (Byakugan backlash which neji uses in shippuden against his clone) Love the story, as well as the one "Vixins and Kitsune" On AFF Please update both soon Thanks: Sean
| Reviewed By: Sean-san On: February 10, 2008 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far, good choices on internal charactor changes, and its nice that you let sasuke keep SOME family, and maybe hinata, sence shes not being pushed so hard, will be able to lead a NORMAL NON-STUDDERING Life-style. And by the way, you spelled uchiha wrong
| Title: Bloodline Abilties
Reviewed By: AnimeLovingFreak On: February 05, 2008 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is a good one and I was thinking that for a bloodline you could give Naruto a dojutsu, or whatever they call the type of bloodlines that have to do with the eyes, called Piercing Eyes, It is a bloodline that allows the user to see through anything even the barriers between dimensions and allows the user to copy the amount of Chakra and the techniques of alternate versions of themselves.
| Reviewed By: W.C. Black On: September 14, 2007 05:32 CDT
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Haven't had the chance to really read this through (but I have skimmed it) and it looks to be fairly interesting so I thought I'd drop a line and weigh in on your question about Naruto and his future honey(s). Personally I think you should stick to a monogamous relationship. The polygamous relationships can be fun, but I've seen too many of them recently so...yeah. Just a good old fashioned monogamous relationship for Naruto. For Sasuke I think you should pull a monogamous relationship but make it known to the female population that he can, if he so wishes, have more than one wife. This could provide an element of comedy, especially once he chooses his girlfriend/eventual-wife (can't you just see Sasuke hiding behind his girlfriend/wife for protection from the ravening hordes of fangirls?). As for recommendations on his eventual pairing? I've seen a rare few fics where the author has portrayed Sasuke as being interested in older women though none that have pursued that into any kind of serious relationship so I'm going to recommend Inuzuka Hana as Sasuke's eventual love interest.
| Reviewed By: Naye On: September 02, 2007 23:53 CDT
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"Uchiha" is how you spell Sasuke's last name. Great start so far and I hope the pairing is Naru/Hina.
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