| "Twisted Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Constantainia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OoOoOoOoOoOOoOOoOO Fluff!!! Lovely!! 'Trunksielins?! Mucho Embareesment!!Funny, though. :)
Hey, though, I must impose on you to watch paragraph form. It's messes up the story's great flow. Peace. |
Reviewed By: Constantainia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mmmm...interesting. I think the 'love' was pushedway too fast, but ur the fic writer, and the characters do what you want them to do, and I would definately suggest following the paragraph rules. Peace. |
Reviewed By: Constantainia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! Trunks-chan!!! It's too bad I'm not Sailor Moon, I'd stalk Trunks...hehe...:P |
Reviewed By: Constantainia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I love UsaxTrunks, even in english. Please watch paragraph structure. Peace. |
Reviewed By: sailorrachel84 On: October 20, 2002 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think your fic is great! Although itv was sad that the senshi all died. Hotaru's was the most goreish. if you can't tell already, I,M A HUGE HOTARU/SATURN FAN! *smillle* but i'm not to mad she had to die. Iin fact, i'm impressed that you though up a Serena/Trunks fic. Most peps pair it Trunks/Hotaru. As 4 the rating, i think the fic is EXCELENT!!! PLEASE WRIT MORE! ASAP! THE SUSPENCE IS REALLY GETTING TO ME. |
Reviewed By: Lyra Silvertongue On: October 11, 2002 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
great!!! glad that you updated!!! email me again!!! thanks a bunch!! ja for now |
Reviewed By: Lyra Silvertongue On: October 09, 2002 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you've done a wonderful job with this and I'm glad that you didn't give up on it. Can you please email me at cute_duckie44@hotmail.com when the next chapter is up beause i want to know when more of this wonderful story is written. thats all for now, ja. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw yeah! Darien got his ass kicked, finally! Serena's showing her girl power. lol Keep it up! I love it already! |
Reviewed By: TL On: August 09, 2002 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD! WRITE MORE!!! This is one of the best I read. |
Reviewed By: TL On: August 08, 2002 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD! WRITE MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: rino_serenity On: July 15, 2002 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue this is a really good story
PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE CONTINUE |
Reviewed By: Firefly-chan On: July 03, 2002 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ I like it! |
Reviewed By: Star-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I luved your fanfic, I really like the way you crossed over the DBZ/SM demensions. keep writing please!! I'll be checking in for updates a lot lol |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 26, 2002 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short chapters but good nonetheless. I want to read more so update soon. I'll be checking for updates. Eo |
Reviewed By: ills [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait till you contiune! |
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