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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 01:54 EST
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WHOOOOOOO ARM!!!!!! D: SHOWER SCENE!?!?!?!? I remember nothing being heard of a shower scene whot! whot! D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D:
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First and foremost I want to say again that I'm sorry about your mom and send her well wishes and hopes se feels better soon. Now on with the review: AWESOME!AWESOME! AWESOME! Excellent chapter. I'm glad that Sesshy finally got his arm back. I can see his using that to his *Uh Hem* full advantage especially where I'm..oops I mean Kagome is concerned. Man, she is one lucky Miko. I love the way you brought Sesshomaru's arm back it was very well thought and unique. Keep up the good work and Please update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter. Blessed be
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Reviewed By: missy71 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 00:32 EST
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Loved the arm restoration scene. I hope that your Mom is feeling better. Grat chapter all around.
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Title: fictionaddiction
Reviewed By: fictionaddiction [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 23:30 EST
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... you just have to leave me wanting more at the end of each chapter... *sighs* Aye, I have a little addiction and although I will never get angry with someone for not writting as fast as I want it (because I understand how long it can take to write sometimes) it doesn't mean I don't get all bouncy waiting for the next fix. I think I've been following this story since shortly after chapter 30 came out and now I'm completely hooked. Whoever wrote that recommendation on A Single Spark about this fic, I thank you. Anywho, saw your remark about my name and thought I'd leave an extended hi. *waves*
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Reviewed By: TreetopScout [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 23:02 EST
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Even though I have a soft spot for Kouga, I can't wait for the kids to kick his ass. He's got it coming to him this time. At least with the kids going after him he probably won't get killed, which is more than likely what Sesshomaru would do. I like how you handled the "arm gifting" part. It worked, it made sense, and it wasn't rushed. A lot of stories that include his arm coming back to him rush it and it ends up being kind of lame. Sorry about your mum! Hope she feels better. I had laryngitis last week, which turned into bronchitis and then I passed a kidney stone so I certainly FELT like I had gotten into a car accident. Versus a train. Or some other large moving object. A cruise ship maybe. You understand I'm sure. Again, glad she's ok. Oh, and the whole shower scene isn't THAT big of a deal! I mean seriously, a naked Sesshomaru standing in a room full of steam...with water dripping down his well-muscled torso...beckoning me (uh..Kagome) to help him wash his hair...*shiver*... NOPE! Not a big deal at all. I might just skip the next chapter entirely. I'll write my OWN six page shower scene where he and Kagome re-tile the shower stall and then speak of the dangers of getting soap in your eyes. ...Uh, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: December 13, 2007 22:05 EST
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I don't know if you know.. but on A.S.Spark chapters 55 and up are not showing up. Only up to Subjugate Chapter... So I switched over to this site.. Great job so far U_U *bows to Sunset Miko's greatness.....
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 13, 2007 19:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ceiling full of pictures of Kagome? Is our dim bulb Hojo a stalker? Will you let us read about Hoho trying to throw Sesshy out of the house and giving him a lecture? Please? That would be priceless. I love your sweet moments between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. It's nice seeing a different side of the Western Lord. I even love the way you work in his insecurities about the missing limb and the fact that he has the insecurities. Sounds like he'll be getting back pretty soon though. Looking forward to the next installment. You do weave a spell-binding tale.
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Reviewed By: fictionaddiction [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 16:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say thanks for writting an awesome story and that I can hardly wait for the next chapter. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 13:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I don't think I've heard of those games. I can't believe Hojo! At first I kinda felt sorry for him but come on! Is he in his right mind? I mean, *sighs* nevermind. That's just sad. He's kinda creepy too. Pictures of Kagome plastered on his ceiling, whoa. He's like that one guy Malcolm who has all these pictures of Olivia in his room, he even has a pillow case with Olivia's face on it (from the movie She's the Man). Anyways thanks again for the update and see ya later. ceira
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: December 13, 2007 11:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just now am getting to write because I had exams and those were just bluh. I'm finished now and am on break so now I can write all I want to. I just have to say that I read some of the chapters I've missed and those were good. Wow. You did a really good job on those chapters I'm trying to remember the last chapter I had read but I just got through with the last chapter so I guess I'll just do that one. Not to say that all the others were not good I just can't remember all of those since I haven't read in a while. I know that Sesshoumaru and Kagome went to her time which was a shocker. Ohh and that spell that Kagome has for Sesshoumar is just great. Now I'm starting to remeber some things. Anyways, that was so cool and the children and also Inuyasha missing Kagome is so sweet. I can't believe that Kouga still believes that Kagome will be his. I guess Sesshoumaru is going to have to beat it into him. Just like Hojo is still in his own little world. I can't believe that he thinks that Kagome is helping a thug. That one I had to laugh on. I just think that there is no hope for him unless he sees something that may show that Kagome is off limits. I don't think even then he may believe it and make up an excuse like that last time. Ohh and I wonder does Kagome have a demon side to and not know it. She may need to tell Sesshoumaru sometime soon before something happens. Ohh and I hope that Sesshoumaru gets over the whole arm thing and try to make the best of being with Kagome since she does not find anything wrong with it. And again I am sorry that I have not been updating like I want to. Exams are through so now I have all the time in the or until January again. This story is great and I hope that you continue cause its just getting to good.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 11:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lime in this chapter! I'm a little disappointed that there are so many flashbacks from the anime in this chapter, though. I think they are a little too long. You could shorten them down quite a bit, since I bet 99% of your readers have already seen the anime and know what happened. Heh, it was kind of unexpected of Sesshoumaru to turn all emo on us, not very like him. And Hojo! He sounds like some kind of psychopath! XD It's gonna be really interesting to see what happens next chapter. If the arm will return, and how. And after that, I can just picture one of Kagome's friends say or think "Uh, I was sure he only had one arm...?" :)
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Reviewed By: tixylix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 09:41 EST
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awww poor Sesshoumaru. is he going to get his arm back?
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 05:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. hojo is just a dumb if not more so than koga. he had the audasity to call sesshomaru a hoodlum, goon, thug & the the damming of them all meathead? i offically hate hojo now. i also know that hojo doesent have the balls to say any of those things to sessy's face so im not too concered about it. i am worried tha kagome might kick his ass for insulting her mate-to-be. oh the arm thing, when are those 2 gonna realize thats what Misaki has been trying to tell them. anyway cant wait for the next chapter hope i get net service in tokyo even though i wont get none hokkaido one love syoze p.s. im still pissed about hojo.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 02:11 EST
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HOLY CRAP!!!! I knew Hojo was one of those creeps T__T I knew it! D: teh arm!!!teh arm!!!!! it shalt return!!!
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Reviewed By: sugar0o [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 02:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant ever say enough abotu this story, its size is amazing, and i certainly know you've still got a ways to go, i look forward to it so much, i love seeing that you've updated b/c this story is so utterly fantastic. - 'r0o'
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