| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 12:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Kouga torture! You're good.. you're super bad good... I LOVE the itchy powder scene. Hum.... so Kagome's dad knows Rin. Is Kagome Rin's half sister after all? Souta's twin, maybe? (Wait, isn't Souta older than Rin? I don't remember.) Ah the mystery deepens. The Rin bits are extra special. Thanks for delivering yet another awsome chapter. /Ima
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 23:13 EST
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Wow this is kind of rediculous...not bad just...how can soooooooo many of copies of that scroll be floting about and it still haveing a chance of comeing true...I'm mean if that witch had a copy she could easily give it to Naraku and he could find some way to prevent it...not that that would be a good thing I mind you..........but any ways thank you for updateing My Sota question was kinda answered and that made me happy...XD...but what is Inuyasha going to tell Sesshoumaru with out getting him selff killed in the process...I'm mean he didn't even tell Sesshy about the Wolves and what if Rin blabs?....will Rin stay with them the rest of the time or will she go back to the past?, can Sota go threw the well now or does he have to wait until he eyes STAY blue?...some many questions and so many I can't think of at the moment but I'm sure they will all be answered in time...thankyou for updateing I love this story....I hope you don't take my earlier word the wrong way, cause I could care less how you decide to make thing work out just as long as they do....X3.....Meow.........Nyuka.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: February 04, 2008 08:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow. Updates on both stories at once. I am humbled. Did you just give away juicy bits of story plot on purpose? (the role of Souta) If not... tsk tsk tsk.... *grin* I hope what I think is going to happen... really happens. But if I tell you it could jinx it... you will have to wait and see if what I think is going to happen is right. You are doing really well keeping up with both of your stories. Happy writings... Chao Chickie. InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 05:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, I believe Kagura has found the prophecy? :) I'm starting to guess that Rin is in fact a half-sister to Kagome? But I still have no clue what Kagome's father is. He can't be human. Maybe some kind of sorcerer? I just realized that Inuyasha and Miroku must have left their scents on Kouga! And the ofuda left by Miroku will probably make the poor wolf a bit suspicious as to what has happened. Hopefully he's not smart enough to figure it out. *grins* Does this count as character-bashing? :D
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 02:32 EST
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Hi, I am about to start reading your fic, I was just stopping by to let you know..Lol... The title and tha story line really apeals to me and anything with a powerful miko and my favorite Inu-Youkai Im all up for it...Well here I go!!!!~HCDK^_^
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Reviewed By: redroseonblacksatin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 00:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See you make me very happy. I'm scrubing my house all day long and finally take a break and there in my email is a note saying you got a new chapter. You made my tired self very pleased. Blessed are the cheese makers.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 16:40 EST
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Chapter 74...really great by the way...I'm glad Sota finaly got that off his chest...is he going to get to go the feudal era too now that it was deturmened that he has a simalar aura as Kagomes...that would be soooooo great I'm mean ya it would be scary that he was there but he could be very powerful too and he would be able to see his sister all the time and even his father when Kagome finaly goes to find him........hmmmmmmm I wander if all the Higurashi's (sp?) can go there and then they wouldn't have to lose Kagome and they could be a great big family *stares off in to space with a dreamy expression) yaaaaaaaaaaaa....XD.........any ways you like toruting your readers don't you making the day draw out for several chapters its not fair dang it XP........you have the power...*pout*....hehe....I love updates...XD...............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo-hoo! XD you are awesome!!! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: halfbreed saiyan goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 06:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totally enjoying this fic so far. When i've read some of the other long standing fanfics i've found they tappered out to the end, and by then i've lost interest, but with yours i've found it's really attention grabbing. The plot is well thought of, and the way your holding off on the big mating between Kagome and Sesshoumaru is very crafty. I love the way you're dedicating each chapter to a day or so. Every time the young 'ens get into mischieve i laugh myself silly. And poor Kouga! But he deserves it anyway. Keep up the good work and i will keep my eyes open for more of your stories.
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Reviewed By: wind sorceress kagura On: January 27, 2008 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story its like the greatest ever!! i think sesshomaru is so sweet to kagome they should be together always! your such a great writer and i hope this story is really long because i cant seem to get enough! ^.^ by the way my email is demoness_of_the_wind_kagura@yahoo.com i would really like to know when your story updates!!!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 22:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's really nice that Sesshoumaru and Souta had that talk. Hopefully it will be the beginning of things getting easier for Souta to handle. I wonder that they the Higurashi family and Sesshoumaru will have something good to tell the investigators when they talk to them about Hojo. I have been wondering about what will happen with the blood on that knife when they test it and if they actually connect it to Kagome and then wonder why she didn't have a cut when they saw her... That lime was really hot. Poor Sessh seems to be finding out how difficult it can be to stick to one's own standards... but so delicious at the same time to wait for something so good. I wonder if Inuyasha is going to have an interesting dream... It must be nice to go to sleep while watching the stars...
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story !!!!!
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Title: Sexy Lime Yummyness review!
Reviewed By: Arry (aka. Sex Goddess) On: January 27, 2008 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh That was hott!!!! Man what a lime that was yummy hehe literally I hope she is inspired to put sesshy delicious velvety steel in her mouth hehehe gods lucky Kagome. And Hojo is finally committed YAY! Now for exams Hope sesshy can massage well I'll bet Kags will need it. Plus more tricks in the feudal era I'm sure well I'm loving it UWUC hon Loves Arry
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Title: Ahhh.....
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 21:11 EST
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I really liked the Sess/Souta scene. Sess is getting a second chance at being a big brother, and Souta gets a glimpse at a bigger family picture. I still think Souta will go through the well someday. He'd get along so well with Shippo! I found the "Hojo bites the white coat guy" scene very entertaining. Should he really be biting people while others think he's hallucinating about animals overrunning the mall? LOL Yeay! The authorities will be testing the knife... now that's something to look forward to. So Kagome finally got to show off her Victoria Secret purchases. That was so worth the wait. Don't let anyone tell you you're waiting too long for the lemon. The journey is just as important. I liked the humor moment where Kagome falls off the bed. One of the best characteristics emerging from this story is the balance between seriousness and fun. You got Naraku and his minions being all plotting and dangerous, while you got the boys and Inuyasha all plotting and ripping on Kouga, for example. You know just when to insert a little comedy, and that's nice. Oh... are we going to get Inuyasha sharing dreams with someone, too? (grasping hands together and grinning wildly) I await with baited breath!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 22:56 EST
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~sessh- uh.. tba's not here today. ~ inu- then who's writing? ~ fg- uh.. who do u think? ~ both-..... its obvious ~ fg- sigh- trick question. anywayz tba says keep up the good work and she'll be glad if u update. ~ inu- y isn't she here? ~ fg- i, am, not, phycic ~bye~ update soon! ~FG~
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