| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] |
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 10:23 PDT
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They need to find her. I have a feeling that all hell is going to break loose when they do...this situation is completely unacceptable!...they shot her!. Smh I luv ur writing sue ur exceptional
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 07:08 PDT
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EEkk! I love this story.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 05:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh great way to keep Kurt in the story line.... I was wondering how you were going to to that... but hat means that he will see Sam's "human time" which is bad...
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 00:18 PDT
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ah-ha! So now Kurt'll be her guard... it was so close! She nearly got out. That kinda chance comes once a month. At least they don't seem to have figured otu the "human night" thing.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 22:47 PDT
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Oh man, I hope Sam will be okay. Trying to escape on the only night she possible could and that stupid guard caught onto her! Poor Sam!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 20:37 PDT
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So, sorry for not reviewing for a long time. I got kinda lazy. ^^ I really love how this fic is starting out. Will Samantha be captured the entire time- or will Kurt break her out? I have to wonder if you're going to bring Kagome into this. Since Kurt has spiritual powers and thinks only two other people in the world are like him, it would be awsome to see Kagome come in kicking butt. xD Anyhoosers, please update soon! I can't wait to read more. -jessie6491
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 08:51 PDT
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Kurt's got violet eyes & black hair? Hmmmmm, sounds like a very familiar lineage! Kagome & InuYasha need to join the convergence on Chicago! OMG, kibble and a floor drain…geez-o-pete! Enjoyed the lightly moments in the P8 darkness…post-it oufuda's are freakin' funny (wish I had a stack at work!), and of course the "alteration" of MacDonnough made coffee shoot out my nose! LOL! Looking forward to the clans' gathering for the search!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 12:05 PDT
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aww everybody's worried! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 21:08 PDT
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I guess they didn't want to give the immediate family a false alarm, but waiting five days is a long time to hold out on them. When they finally find Sam, it'll be an opening of one can of worms that demon-kind did not want to know about. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 13:29 PDT
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That was so sad!! This story is going to have a happy ending, right?!? Update soon please and keep up the wonderful work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Gah! I love it.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 04:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now basically every one knows.. it's a very sad chapter... your turning these out pretty quickly!!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 23:29 PDT
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O boy. The family has been called. Next is inuyasha and I don't even want to imagine the reaction...ryomaru too. Its time to call in the old school to save the baby. Sesshomaru too come to think of it...as Inu no Taisho he has to eliminate the threat of humans discovering youkai and doin wat they're trying to do to sami. Poor baby I hope she doesn't stay they for too manyu chapters...she should escape. What I don't understand though sue is how can ofuda harm her when she has the blood of a powerful miko (kagome) in her veins. If anything I thought she would burn the seals or something...and its obvious that our boy kurt doesn't know that 1/2 demons exist...o well his bad. Great chap...can't wait to read the next
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Reviewed By: free_freeme_free [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 22:53 PDT
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Wow, you said this was going to be a dark story and you weren't kidding. You are not only great at writing romantic stories lines but supense as well. Great job, you got my heart pounding waiting to see what's going to happen to sammantha next.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:48 PDT
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I'm so happy that I've been able to go on the computer today, I would have driven myself crazy for the next 24 hours just about tomorrow! I knew Kichiro would take it like that; I feel bad for the whole family. Man, this is stressful! But I anticipate what is coming next!
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