| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 14:38 PDT
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I don't know which of the Purity stories I love best--but I think it might be this one. I really like how you brought them all together (I kept wondering what was going on with each of them--Kichiro, Ryomaru, Gunnar, Mikio, etc.) I was so happy to see Inuyasha make an appearance & get involved too. I'm waiting day by day (WANTING the weekends to hurry up and get over with!) to see how Kurt & Sam's family finally meet. I really enjoy your writing! It's not about "style" or "technique" for me--it's about enjoyment. That goes for lots of things, doesn't it? (Did I just say that?!)
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 14:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, Sami got a little sneaky-poo at what was under the clothes. I thought for a second that she was going to jump him. That would have been a nice parody scene. Then again, maybe I'm a little too hentai for my own good. :giggles: Anywho, I wanted to slap the jerk for calling Kitch and saying that. I suppose you would get a lot of calls like that if you had your phone number out there in the open. It would be really frustrating. Well, thanks for the chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 13:23 PDT
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Cute!! Keeep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 13:00 PDT
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Omg, that was so nice of Kurt to bring snow for Sam. He's trying to make her stay in the facility as pleasant as possible, which by the way doing a fantastic job. Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out! ;)
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 11:56 PDT
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She likes his love handles. Lolllll. I'm having a hard time picturing his body type despite the description. But I imagine he is handsome all the same. Great chapter. Update again soon...:'( poor kichiro he's losing his mind. I would too if my son went missing.
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Title: Ch 36-37
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 20:51 PDT
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Knew the 2nd pizza was coming, but DAMN...xtra meat & cheese, soda, breadsticks & chocolate! He is fished in! It'll be nice when he realizes it. Peterson needs to be punched in his, um, baby maker. What a piece of shite he is! There's gotta be a scanner of some sort or program in the computer system to detect a chip...maybe? I do not want to even imagine the sick crap on the tapes. Bad enough knowing what we know. Belle's connection to Sami works much better when Sami's happier, yes? Loved Bas & Evans little moment of understanding. Lotta healing to be done between those 2 and this seems like a nice start. The puzzle pieces are getter closer to each other. Just need Kurt to coordinate them. Thanks for two more wonderful chapters!
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Reviewed By: My-Only-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 18:46 PDT
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Awww Kurt is going soft, or just understand more anyway. Btw, is he going to tell her that he is going to try to get her out, or just not going to so she doesn't get her hopes up?
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 17:40 PDT
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I love how Evan and Bas came to some sort of understanding. It may not last long but in these dark moments it really counts.
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Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so sweet, Bas and Evan really needed to reconnect and what a sweet way to do it. I wish Sam would explain hanyou to Kurt, that would be interesting....
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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 16:19 PDT
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Awwww...another sweet chapter of both Kurt and Sam. The ending was touching. I really can't wait to read more of their relationship. Seeing things from Evan's perspective was nice too. Thanks for another great chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 15:50 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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^_^ I come back from vacation and get to read 4 new chapters YAY! LOVED THEM! I still can't believe that Kurt has asked her name but I guess I still have something to look forward to.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 15:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw so cute!!!! Little Evan being followed around by little Sami.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 15:29 PDT
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To accept that you will never see the light of day again, that's a sad thought. At least Sam has some solace int the fact that Kurt is still there to, in a way, help her though her terrible days. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 15:01 PDT
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As soon as I read the name of this chapter I chuckled! His form of getting answers was so cute I just could not stop laughing! I'm glad that Bas and Evan gotta get at least some of their feelings out. I just hope Kurt can get through those tapes fast!
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Title: very good.
Reviewed By: zorioko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 14:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up Sue!
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