| "Tree Messaging" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 17:22 CST
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I just finished reading your story so far. It looks good keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what else happens I'll be putting it into my favorites so I can get your updates!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 22:26 CST
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Nice update!!! I enjoy the confusion that Kagome is having at just finding out that she's not an ordinary girl, but a reincarnated miko, the protector of the sacred jewel, and on top of that falling in love with a half demon. As from Princess Mia from 'The Princess Diaries' stated, "Let's add a tiara.' Now the fun begins, although my question would be does Sesshomaru show up, as well as Koga or did they not survive into the modern era? Was Inuyasha really released from his tree imprisonment? What will he look like? Where is his sword? I would like to ask about the Foehn Winds. Are they similar to the Santa Anna winds of California, or the Chinook winds of Canada? I, for one, actually enjoyed the brief intro about the wind phenomenon. I think that it added to the story. Way to go on the research for authenticity!! Have a great Christmas!!! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 12:59 CST
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Great story!!! Rather interesting as to how Inuyasha is going to get out of the tree. I like this particular perspective of the Shikon journey through the present instead of the past. I can so far see Miroku's persona through Yasou well as possibly Sango through Taiko. I see this being a really good story with a lot of potential. Thanks for a wonderful story, and keep up the good work.
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Title: Your not quitting R U?
Reviewed By: libertyrjac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Please write more you gat a great start. And I love that this takes place in Kagome's time. You need a beta reader. I don't know what that is? But if it's just someone to proofread, check for typo-s, I can do it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... well kagome met inuyasha... where did he go... yasuo seems to act like miroku... and what about the new girl... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 14:37 CST
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YAY, UPDATE!!! Lol, this story is just getting interesting. I guess we have Sesshomaru, Miroku and Sango reincarnated, or hidden I guess, but what about everyone else? Neh, just a thought. Anyway, I am curious about Naraku, and where he is in all of this (probably in the Yakuza) but it's your story. Neh. Anyway, I look forward to the next update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 14:12 CST
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watch your malapropisms and homophones! spell check doesn't catch them because they're real words, just the wrong ones. common example: 'you're' is 'you are', 'your' means you own it. give your work a bit of a read-over or have someone beta read it before you post. what is a good story could become a great story when your readers don't have to mentally correct things, it's distracting. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 14:52 CST
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How annoying. Please update. Afterall, not too many people try to make this sort of thing. Too many AU's, *sigh*. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 00:29 CDT
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Ohkay, this sounds like it might be interesting.
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 10:18 CDT
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this story is so cute! and very original! i cant wait to see where youre going with this.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 23:43 CDT
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okay, now i get how he got there. poor tree had to suffer an impatient hanyou for over five centuries. at least he was able to see the passage of time outside, maybe he won't be so inept and paranoid of the modern gadgets like cars and trains, etc. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 00:15 CDT
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i am intrigued, it this a one-shot or is it just the beginning? . . . no matter, i shall look forward to more stories from you. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 23:06 CDT
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Interesting, very interesting. You've already got me hooked, I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i only wish your first chapter was a bit longer. You did succeed in getting me hooked!! =) Very original and i look forward to the next chapter...good luck!
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