| "The Weight On His Shoulder" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 18:16 CDT
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Very VERY cute. I loved it. It showed such a softer side of things. And how nice we all wish Sesshomaru would be time to time. haha. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. I like just realized that I didn't review for this story *Gasps* I'm so sorry. And you should really make another chapter, turn this into story! It would be just as good as White Rose! Absolutely! Love this story! Please make an other chapter, or a sequel. PLEASE! ~_~Hitsugaya630~_~
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW im in love with this!!! and im hoping you will do it soon ^^
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 15:35 CST
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Thank you so much for the thanks! Always a pleasure to find and read a talented author. You know, that dialog b/t IY and Sess could very well be the start of how the shrine became Higurashi property, ensuring that K is living there at the right time..... Yep, that could work very well! This now concludes this LadyCash's review of your authors notes!
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Title: KawaiiKekeChanNLI
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 13:13 CST
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Aww. This reminds me of my first fan fic! Apart from yours is a lot more skilled and crafted a whole lot better ^.^ I loved the fluff, it was such a cute fic! Congrats!
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Title: Wonderful!!!
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved reading this story. I am looking forward to reading the sequel. I am planning on looking for your other fiction you mentioned that you are working on now. I was wondering ... did InuYasha talk with future Sesshy yet in this story yet? Sometimes it just seemed like he did... or does feudal Sesshy know alot about the future or did Inu tell him? Thank you for writing this story and posting it for me to be able to read. Dei Dei
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... very sweet... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 01:06 CST
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Kawaii!!!!!! This is simply lovely and I loved it immensely. Wonderful job! The love is so clear and it truely was an awesome job! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the very best stories i have ever read. the gentility with widh you write is really quite moving. you were able to expose and explore so many emotions is a one shot, that i am amazed that it didn't feel rushed. lots of waff, but no silliness. emotions are hard enough for most people to express in their own life, and you are able to do it so well in a story. you have a truely remarkable talent. thank you so much for sharing it with us.
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Reviewed By: Violetcarson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! I think a sequel is definitely in order!! There is so much you could do with him in the future, along with (hopefully) Sango and Miroku. What about Shippo though? I suppose he could stay with Sesshoumaru...(I see a ShipRin pairing in the future!!!!) I absolutely loved the way InuYasha was so embarassed by everything, it was utterly adorable! A wonderful one-shot! I really do hope you do a sequel!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 15:03 CST
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Very nice. You handled the emotions well, very real and touching. The characterization was wonderful as well, giving them the maturity that time and battle would provide. Very enjoyable read, well done.
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Reviewed By: KagomesTwin On: November 01, 2007 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED every word of this wonderfully addicting fic!!!!! If you won't make a sequel and post it, would you just email it to me?????? I TOTALLY LOVED IT! it is sooooo awesome! I just wish there was more to read! I LUV THIS SOOO MUCH! please email me at: princess_peaches_may31@yahoo.com Thanks! ~KagomesTwin~
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Reviewed By: Redi Hebi On: October 29, 2007 14:43 CDT
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you did a very good job writing thios i hope you continue it. it would be very much appreaciated. thank you
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great one shot! Just a bit of grammatical errors, but really well written with a lot of depth, emotion and suspense. I really appreciated your story and can see this easily being more than a one-shot story with a lot of questions that you brought up in this story. I hope that you continue writing. Thank you for this story.
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Title: Abercrombielvr07 loves you.
Reviewed By: abercrombielvr07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful. amazing. perfect. overwhelming. creative. addicting. cute. heartwarming. cuddlywuddly. did I leave anything out? oh yeah. genious. andddd... make the sequel. if you write it, it will rock. i just know it. :]
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it. I really liked it! Nice job!
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Reviewed By: Rays On: October 26, 2007 15:59 CDT
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Very nice story. Good, flowing, storyline and decent spelling (more important than most people think). You should really do a sequel in the form of a full blown story (however do try to put in some more drama than just showing inu coping with modern day live - this has been done to much already) and simply use this story as the intro. Can't wait to read sequel, hopefully you decide to go for it! greets, rays.
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Reviewed By: QuantumTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 13:35 CDT
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Very will written. Interesting premise for the story. Hope there's a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this. If you decide to make it into a longer story, I would love to read it. Thanks for posting it.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as I told you previously... I LOVE IT!!! haha I hope I soon read your other story... can't wait to see it posted!!!
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Reviewed By: Katoni On: October 25, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was a great fanfic. I hope you come out with a sequal. I would really enjoy reading more. Great plot and it was so romantic. Two thumbs way, way up.
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Title: swasdiva
Reviewed By: swasdiva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great use of the title as the ending line. It really unites the many emotional strings, tying them together in something firm and solid, something hopeful and happy. I really liked this piece. Glad you posted it!
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