| "The Pure of Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimeNerd [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 21:13 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah really good update soon please
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 03:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 10:38 CST
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she is definitely a little rough around the edges, but with the life she has led...
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Title: great
Reviewed By: chicke [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 22:02 CST
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Update soon!
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Title: Ivory its awesome
Reviewed By: Water Goddess (Ebony) On: November 06, 2007 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a really good fanfic. I loved it you did a good job on your first fanfic. You seriously need to update I'm waiting. Kagome was so funny. Poor Inuyasha NOT. Well I loved it see you at school. UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! Christina (Ebony)
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 10:07 CST
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Interesting to have her meet up with Shippo and Kouga first... I was confused though, you did not make it very clear but were they talking about who was to tutor Kagome?
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Reviewed By: KageOokami69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story so far. who is kurama; the only thing i can think of is it's shippo. please cotinue, can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 11:58 CDT
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Nice update :) You would think that Kagome would have to be a little more rough around the edges after all she went through in the past. Good luck with your busy time (and being sick).
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Reviewed By: ayjah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 23:10 CDT
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interesting choice in cross over animes ... will look to see where you go with this :)
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Reviewed By: Moonsharmony(toolazytosignin) On: November 01, 2007 23:28 CDT
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It's not bad, and I'd like to see where you're going with this. However, I'd like to see you develop each scene a little more. Even with that first section it feels like you're jumping from one scene to the next. You don't have to write 10 pages of description, but I would like there to be more description of where she is and what's going on around her. And it'd definitely be nice if you could make your chapters at least twice what you have for your first one.
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Title: the pure of heart
Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 18:12 CDT
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i reely like this story
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