| "White Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 224 ] |
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Reviewed By: Evasivelover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Did you delete the past chapters by any chance? I left off around chapter 21 (I think) and I just came back from vacation to see it starts off at chap 24. Is there any way you could repost the last few chapters up? BTW I think your story is QUITE wonderful =) thus the reason why I'd like to read those past few chapters. I can't help if my curiousity has taken over lol. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 14:07 CDT
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... sorry, that was rather bad.
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Reviewed By: Volleygirl07 On: August 17, 2008 19:21 CDT
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I'm very interested in the book. i'd like to someday buy it. are you going to call it White Rose or change it?
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 21:14 CDT
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hey, sorry I ragged on you earlier, that's a totally awsome reason to cut it like you did. I love this story, not to mention the entire beauty and the beast concept. is there any way I can find it once you publish it? I wouldn't mind ordering it, could you possibly email me back the title or something? it's okay if your busy, just thought it'd be a good read, seeing as I liked everything sans the last chapter.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 15:34 CDT
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Grrrrrr. I understand that plagiarism is a fear of many authors. And I understand that you want to publish your story. However plagiarism and inspiration are hardly the same thing. You yourself are guilty of being inspired by other works, realistically your level of "inspiration" could be construed as plagiarism. Not only did you take the Beauty and the Beast story as the basis for your story but your characters belong to an anime/manga, hence why it is a fanfic. It seems to me that you are massively overreacting to someone telling you that they thought one of your ideas was cool enough to inspire them to write another fanfiction based on a fanfiction. If you want to be one of those kinds of authors like Anne Rice who slaps lawsuits on anyone who even thinks about writing a fanfic that has anything to do with something she thought of then go for it. But to me that seems extremely hypocritical given the forum you chose to original write in.
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 00:32 CDT
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Wait...you posted an ending? I don't think I got to read any more after Kagome got together supplies and then went to sleep in Inu's bed. Shoot...yeah if you posted it the past few days, I've been taking care of my mom because she just got out of the hospital. Anyways, I think it's wonderful that you're going to publish your story, and I wish you much luck! Would it be to much to ask for you to keep me updated every once in a while in how the publishing is going, and also to let me know where to get a copy of the book? Because I'd definitely love to read more. White Rose has been amazing, and I'm sure it'll be successful once published too! I mean, you practically had a cult following on just here! Oh, one more thing...would it be possible for you to email me at least a summary of the ending? I'm so mad that I missed it, especially after looking forward to it so much. Thanks so much for a great story, and again, good luck!
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Reviewed By: foxy4ever duhh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 23:05 CDT
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Since I am to assume that you will not be posting the work anymore, and are making it into an original story I was wondering if you could post the book title and information on the book when you do publish it. I try to keep up with authors I read and since you could be publishing it I would be interested in reading it. I understand that the publication may take a while but the information would be helpful none-the-less if you would give a potential title at least.
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever (not logged in) On: August 15, 2008 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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NOOOOO!!!!! i'm glad you're continuing on with the story but i don't like that you're publishing it. not that that's a bad thing. but now if i want to read it, i have to physically buy it to read. not that i won't when you get published, i just like reading what i want without having to pay for it. good luck in your publishings.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 21:25 CDT
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omg, r u really gonna publish this story?! o.O so lucky. i'd do anything to get to chance to have connections with an editor or publisher. anyways, i can understand y u rushed to end the story wif a different ending. and im sure it'll become a hit for ur book if it is published. :) all the best, Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 16:00 CDT
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Aaaaw! One of the best storys I have read!!!! Keep it up and make more! So sad that it's over T~T. Beautiful ending. I'd love to read more of your storys, and I will! Lol!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 23:06 CDT
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well, that was kind of...anticlimatic....she just let him go with a kiss? Kind of disappointing, even if you did have to rush the ending. But, I loved all of the imagery and the bonding those to managed to have in their seclusion. All in all, good work. ^-^ I put this in my favorites.
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Reviewed By: volleygirl07 On: August 14, 2008 21:53 CDT
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I LOVE WR!!!!!! I was bummed when you said that you were cutting the story short but i still love the ending! You're a great writer and I LOVE WR!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 16:29 CDT
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I cried. So not funny. I was bawling. I didn't really like how the Queen just like Inu go but I get the fact that you didn't get to write out the whole story like you wanted to. Regardless, I loved the story and I will probably end up re-reading it like fifteen billion times. I am now off to read your new story so expect my review from there, too. Thanks so much, again, for this story!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... glad it was a happy ending... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: punkrock_grl92 (not signed it) On: August 14, 2008 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly I couldn't see how you planned on ending it the way it was.. It didn't seem like an ending was anywhere close or that the story was close to being completed... And I also felt that there were a lot of extra stuff in the story that dragged it out and that didn't nessessarilty need to be included, but dispite my initial disappointment in hearing the story would be ended early, I have to say the ending wasn't all that bad. I rather liked it, overall.
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