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Title: Yowza!
Reviewed By: Scico-Jin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo dude this a great story this right up there with 'Weapon of Mass Destruction' and Hawker_748's works. Yes it is that good. I am also familiar with your works over in the Eva section. I have read them all, except one 'Incubus Succubus'. I am NOT a fan of Asuka doing anything sexual with anybody, but Shinji. Yes I admit it I'm Shinji/Asuka Fanboy. Well not entirely I just can't stand Asuka getting porked by someone that is not our favorite wimpy hero(receives glares from Tenchi Masaki and Keitaro Urashima!) In fact I wish more fics had Shinji/Girl/Girl for the pairing. Hell, Shinji/Harem should be more prominent. Of course that is just my opinion. On a side note after 'The Legacy' is complete. Could you like maybe, do a morning after chapter for 'The Mixer Party'? I apologize if I'm coming off as little too pushy on that request. It's such a good fic and the ending leaves the reader with the feeling of wanting more. Also the aftermath would be quite entertaining. 'Assistance' would also be a good one to add a second chapter to. That one also kinda leaves ya hanging. But that could just be your style for oneshots. Woops! it seems this review has gotten away from me. Any way please consider my requests, for all the readers that LOVE your works. This has been a message from the Nutcase, Scico-Jin.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: February 21, 2008 02:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. so many great chapters in one update. you are truly amazing. those were a series of great chapters. though it is sad that nyamo is being left behind. and it seems like granny hina will be taking care of business. though the appearance of kentaro bodes unwell for naru right?
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 00:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! 4 chapters so quick,its floored me! Hope we DO eventually get to Haru & Kei's return to the Inn. BTW great handling of the obsessed teacher and also of how the students and faculty are seeing him for who he really is! dennisud
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 19:06 EST
Comment/Review:
Another good set of chapters. Your really went all out with making Shinobu's teacher seem like the stalker type. Add a attempted murder charge with that and he won't be staying for long. Unless he actually killed that person. And with how Keitaro is developing along with the girl's, its easy to see that he will probably end up with nearly all of them that he can. Including Kanako and possibly Haruka or Nyamo.
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Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: February 08, 2008 00:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent writing so far, the depth of your story is incredible. Keitaro and Haruka had alot of nice scenes, hopefully Haruka and Nyamo won't be the only ones to get some.
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellete' once again you have made a vast leap in originality. I was also wondering if i could borrow your Idea on Huruka being a cousin rather than aunt if not I will go with my own ideas and just be kinky as all hell.
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Title: 11
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 06, 2008 07:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Been reading this since the start, so I thought it was about time I dropped you a line & told you how much I am enjoying your little fic. The premise (i.e.: harem-fics) is as old as Love Hina itself, but that in NO way detracts from just how good this is. I am enjoying how you are tieing all the girls together for Keitaro. Man, is HE in for a surprise when he gets back. Then again, so are the girls. 'Cousin' Haruka has been well and truely breaking him in for the others, hasn't she! There will be some raised eyebrows when say, Kitsune goes to flirt with him like she usually does when he returns. No nosebleeds this time! And Naru's in threrapy, while Kitsune tries to scheme herself in on it all. Plus, on the horizon we have a possible showdown with Shinobu's teacher. All in all, a damn fine read. Can't wait to see where you take us. T
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Title: GO SHINOBU
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: February 05, 2008 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter and thanks again for the quick and long updates. GO shinobu. its great that shinobu is finally getting a say in things. i hope that kanako is going on a seek and destroy mission against that idiotic teacher.
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems Keitaro will need 64,000 V-8's! ;-) Still I think the dynamic can work and I can't wait to see what happens to that Doornob of a Homeroom teacher. BTW who' get preggers first?!?!? Nyamo? ;-)
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 18:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, the whole Molmol marriage law allowing multiple spouses has been done before. But still it is interesting since they all are agreeing on it. But Naru will still be a problem since she still hasn't made up her own mind. But we'll just have to see what this will lead to.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: deepmisc On: February 01, 2008 00:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best written and most interesting fics that I have ever read.While I initially thought the content would be pretty predictable, the introduction of a few new characters such as the teacher serve to keep things interesting. Not that the original plot wasn't interesting enough.. Keep it going!You obviously have a talent for writing..
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Reviewed By: anon2 On: January 28, 2008 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Minor spelling errors but nothing glaring. It's got great writing and a great plot. Hopefully you'll get some more titbanging and some footjobs in there. ;D
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 22:42 EST
Comment/Review:
It was a great chapter and it shows possible sub-pairings of potential alliances between characters with Naru,Kitsune, and Mutsumi teaming up for Keitaro. Motoko and Tsuruko are going for it. Shinobu, Koalla Su, and possibly Nyamo are a team now. Kanako and possibly Haruka could join in. Hopefully, you'll have a good way to make this a believable harem story. And besides, we know that Naru does love Keitaro, she just has problems admitting to that.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 19:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so obvious this will be a harem pic and the way its building up i see a few of the girls pairing off do kei won't be overwhelmed. Still Lucky SOB! Great story!
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Title: another fine chapter
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: January 17, 2008 22:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the quick and enjoyable update. I am assuming that the keitaro group will be heading back to hinata soon. cant that annoying teacher be blown up already? get su and nuke him a few times please.
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