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| "HOW TO LOSE SESSHOUMARU IN TEN DAYS" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 07:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be the best opening ever... and I had to write this little bit right away to let you know that, so know that you earned a review from me with the first paragraph! I hope the rest is that perfect! ~ OMG I love Bullshit! it's the best card game ever next to Screw Your Neighbor! ~ I think that is the first time I have ever laughed at an Authors Note... No shit you don't own Bill Gates... shit... ~ Ok, now Kikyo reminds me of my best friend Maggie, she always is saying that she doesn't roll that way when referring to her orientation. I usually hate Kikyo, but here I like her! ~ Ok, that was all that I just HAD to say right away for the first chapter.. I think I'll save the rest for the end of the latest chapter... Owww! my sides hurt from laughing! (after the first date) ~ Ok, I had to go watch the Milkshake video on You Tube cause I hadn't seen it yet cause I live under a rock or something and OMG... I am so red in the face thinking about Sesshoumaru doing that. I'm so embarrassed for him. i have almost too much empathy... almost! ~ WHAAAAAHHH!!! I hope you write fast because I want more :( NOW! I can't really tell how fast you are writing it, but it seems to be going quickly. I hope my way of reviewing this time didn't get too annoying, but I though you might enjoy seeing my first reactions to some things... I had a feeling when I read that first paragraph that it would be good. I probably won't do another review like that again, but I promise you another when you update! Oh, and wouldn't that pheromone stuff start to work on her too? I mean, humans do react to pheromones... I know scent can be a huge turn on and she seems like she might get in a position to get a whiff... and how the hell does a shampoo turn hair pink with blue highlights? I know it's possible to have lighter highlights with a single color bacuse natural ones show through, but in all my life as a cosmetologist's daughter I have never heard of such a thing... not that I care, you could just say that it is possible in your universe these two are torturing each other in and that would be just fine and dandy with me... just thought I would comment on it... and see if I can learn something new. Ok, that's it. I need sleep. No more writing stuff (especially reviews) when I should have been in bed hours ago. I get real chatty when I am sleepy, so I hope long reviews don't bug you. ok, I'll be waiting for that update!
| Title: Hello, Mortal.
Reviewed By: the_overlord_of_death On: January 09, 2008 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO funny! OMMG! When that Tampon fell on fluffy's face I almost fainted.And the kareoke was 2 die 4!Please keep on writing, it's so hilarious! I LOVE IT! And hi shary, or theblackangels!
| Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh the irony. *giggle* haha! kaggy got a little of her own medicine. hopefully their clothes will dry b4 they wake up. though it would be funny. *evil chuckle* i like ur writting style. its nice yet evil at the same time. too bad kags fainted. update soon. ~TBA~
| Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:02 CST
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i like it. keep goin' with this story, it's FUUUUUNNY! Update soon!^_^
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