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| "She Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 210 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 18:09 EST
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I'm waiting for Kaien to show up
| Title: Umm...
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 15:52 EST
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Ichigo is putting Rukia through a lot of pain. I have mixed feelings about him -even if I adore Ichigo in the manga and some other fics- I want to slap him but when I think about it this situation has become mostly Rukia's fault for being weak. I actually feel like slapping them both XD Oh, well! Update soon.
| Title: patience is a virtue...
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 15:01 EST
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that I don't have!! God its killing me, seriously. where is it going and, I don't know, I feel lost...again. Nah, I'm just reading for right now. I have no clue and I stopped guessing around the fourth chapter so in every five days I just click on the e-mail notification and read. I guess when the time comes the plot will resolve and I will learn but for now ıt just makes me feel depressed, because I have no idea whats going on and I can't even make predictions. but truth be told no other fanfic made me feel that, even if its the worst feeling that you can feel while reading something, it just shows how you manage to effect me(or any other reader you have here=) keep writing, next Wednesday will be the update(since you have a schedule that you never break) and I shall wait...and read...and wait for the other...
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. Reading the reviews for this is almost as good as reading the story. Very emotional responses from everyone. Very impressive.
| Title: nah!
Reviewed By: kiteEatingTree [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 05:08 EST
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fuck the schedule!!!! ^-^v figure by chap5 there will be 50 rev/comments...
| Reviewed By: alchemist1203 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 04:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting so far. I've read all of your fanfics, and I absolutely loved all of them. I can't figure out the plot of this story. Reading the fic made me cry and sympathetic towards Rukia's situation. Honestly, in my opinion, Rukia seem to be out-of-character. I can't picture her as someone this emotionally weak and who will just let a guy used her like that. Ichigo's character here just made me want to grab his hair and pull really hard until he doesn't have any hair on top of his head anymore. I mean, why the heck is he doing this to Rukia?! The fanfic itself was very well-written. I can't wait to read what's going to happen to Ichigo & Rukia on this story. I really hope that it's at least a happy ending for both of them. I'm running out of tissues to wipe my tears away.
| Reviewed By: BleachedBee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 16:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! I have absoultely no idea what may or may not happen in this story, but I think that's what makes this a good read and why I just have to keep coming back. I still want Ichigo dead-not full on dead now but maybe slightly dead. Yeah, I like that. Within a inch and all that...LOL
| Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 11:52 EST
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well, still no clue as to where this is going. all i know is that in the end it'll be ichiruki (it will be, right?) but as to how it is going to happen, well, have no idea what so ever. i keep on thinking up of scenarios and stuff. honestly, i love your story. you have a way of writing that makes your characters seem alive. oh, and don't mind those scheds. you can update anytime you want, from now til the next 24 hours you know. forget the damn sched.somethings up. ichigo's going out of his usual way to be nice to rukia. i wonder why. is it just guilt? hope not. is it just a cover up? please dont let it be that too. and the biggest question of all, why is he with orihime? what the hell does he want to prove or happen anyway? and the way he come to her. thare isn't even a tiny caress that i can see there. no fleeting touches and sweet kisses. he just does the act and up and leaves. why? that is a very odd ( and not so enjoyable) way to mate. is it really a simple release for him? is her body just the means for his release? well, honestly i don't think so. that is why i have been ranting on and on about reasons. the reasons that he ahs for doing what he is doing. i mean, he isn;t that much of a jerk is he? anyway, as i have said earlier, forget those damn scheds. just post the next chap already, um, yeah, please? i can't wait to read what happens next. so please, if yu could update faster, please do. ^_~
| Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 07:24 EST
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Aww Rukia, let me give you a hug!! {{Hugs}} Good chapter. This chapter did shed some light (not enough though) on what's going on with Rukia and Ichigo, but I'm sure you're going to slowly reveal to us the entire plot in that speacial way only you only can. But Rukia needs to be asking that question (why do you love her and use me?) to Ichigo and not to her refection... build up that courage girl!!! Don't let him use you!! That's one thing that's always ture about me when it comes to that old saying "Why buy the cow when the milk's free?" They will use you up unless you put your foot down. Okay, I've rattled on enough, unitl next time! @_@
| Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 05:45 EST
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well it seems Ichigo is joining the conversations but I guess I still want Rukia to stand up for herself. I mean no matter how much she loves him she has to somehow make him understand that what he was doing was wrong. and oh boy how do I want to kill Orihime. I mean I never thought I could hate the character more(since I'm not reading any IchiHime) but now its over the top. A car should come and run over her...really. Jeez, I still have no idea where this is going and I'm dying to understand the logic lying behind, how you are going to legitimize this behaviour(and Im not even sure if its suppose to be legitimized, it might be a trait of common teenager with raging hormones). I mean I know people(a few of the guys around me) who sleeps with a girl just because he doesnt want to ask and scare his "beloved" girlfriend. I simply have no idea what kind of logic that it but its also a twisted legitimation of it, if the girlfriend believes in martial sex. So how many chapters is it going to be? I mean are we going to see her leaving for Tokyo? What is Ichigo planning to do? how is he going to react? and I have a suspicion that the hell will break loose during that science project(if that is a real project). I don't know...just keep writing, I want to see what you have up in your sleeve. cheers and cookies!
| Title: Ch 4
Reviewed By: moonflowers [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 05:13 EST
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Yay for update! :) Loved the way you matched up each character with his/her analogous form of poetry (Keigo - none. LOL!). Normally I'm not a big fan of angst, but your angsty Rukia is so realistic that I can't help but sympathize with her. Can't wait to see how you'll resolve Ichigo's situation (and redeem him from what I find to be appallingly bad behavior).
| Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 17:10 EST
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Ugh, Rukia... poor girl. She's really suffering in this one. But good chapter... I don't know why I didn't get the email notification, but it was great to find it here... I was dying to read something good. But back to this review- Ichigo is certainly not being fair, and Rukia is being way too easy. She needs to let him know (as bad as she craves his touch) that he cannot do this- bouncing in and out of her life like he has is NOT cool. He needs to make a choice, and stick with it. It doesn't make sense - what's making him stay with Hime if he inwardly doesn't want to be with her? I hope you will explain that a bit more as the story progesses. But it's a good read - and it has me all rilled up and fussing... like I said, to draw out any raw emotion in a reader makes it a worthy read. Unitl next time, ta-ta! gg
| Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: BleachedBee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 12:08 EST
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Great work again. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 09:10 EST
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at this point, i really have no clue at all what ichigo is thinking and why he is like that. i know there just have to be a reason for that. for why he could and would treat rukia like that. dammit, she can't just be that 'body'. argh, this is really frustrating! I am no where near to finding out what this is all about. what that is all bout. at least in other stories i knew where it is heading. but here, damn i am so clueless. anyway, once again, you have worked yout talent and magic on me. to be this affected by a mere three chap fic, where i still have no idea where it is headed, that speaks volumes about your writing abilities.please update, say like in an hour? i know you promised to update every five days, but that is just too long! will rukia leave for tokyo? will something happen before that that will make her change her mind and plans? will she leave so that ichigo will be able to finally be aware of just how much she really means to him? damn! so many possibilities and not one is even a sure shot. so im babbling, sorry, just so frustrated right now. i'll be eagerly waiting for the next chap.
| Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: TaleWeaver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 07:04 EST
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*sigh* damn, these two just keep making themselves miserable, don't they? Are we going to get some of ichigo's pov any time soon? I'd kinda (read, REALLY) like to know why he's putting them both through this. It might be just my fangirlism, but I keep getting the feeling he's almost as miserable as Rukia. It also keeps itching at me that if Rukia just stood up (because even in this AU, I'm getting the impression that she doesn't have trouble with that normally) and TALKED to him about this, they could get rid of most of this baggage and develop a healthy relationship. At the very least, they could develop a happy friendship again. I can't remember the name, but the reviewer who mentioned the word 'abuse' was absolutely right, I think. What Ichigo's doing here teeters right on the border of 'unhealthy' and 'abusive' - the only reason he hasn't tipped over is that I'm mortally sure that he doesn't realise what this is doing to Rukia - because she won't open her mouth and TALK to him! (kudos for working in rukia's canon 'double personality', btw, even if it's a little different than canon. But it fits here) Ichigo undoutedly thinks that she doesn't want anything more than this, and Rukia's afraid to ask for more because she thinks this is all he wants from her anymore. Please tell me that crisis is going to happen soon, and Rukia's brought to the point where she demands what she needs from Ichigo. I've never been a fan of the Kaien/Rukia storyline (nothing against Kaien, just the dripping angst) but in this case, I think he might be just what Rukia - and eventually Ichigo -need. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to re-read ONS, because I'm depressed.
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