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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu not at home On: April 18, 2008 01:11 EDT
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i had already written something witty and relevant but alas, my sister's computer decided to restart the browser before i could properly submit the intelligently complimentary review that i promptly forgot. who remembers things that they believe will be saved somewhere safe, i sure don't. now i am very tired and need to go to sleep so i can get up at 5am to take my sister to the airport without wrecking or getting lost by falling asleep behind the wheel. so, please just pretend that this says something humorous about yasha bathing the girl who was dumped on his draw bridge and something about it was nice of him to purchase clothes for her and ask after her treatment. i did enjoy reading this chapter and sorry i couldn't think of what i had originally written. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 22:03 EDT
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this is great i can't wait to see what happens next please update soon
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: April 17, 2008 21:04 EDT
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Thanks for updating. You're certainly keeping us intrigued!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 04:33 EDT
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I really like this story so far! My only complaint would be that it is moving very slowly, but that's something that's hard to change, because it is dictated by your schedule. I can wish though. I really like this new take, the originality and exploration of the characters. Great job!
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Title: Perfet 10
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 (not logged in) On: March 20, 2008 02:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never once did I lose interest, which for me is hard to say about anything actually. I really can not wait till the next update! Inuyasha's attraction towards Kagome made me laugh, it was just funny for some reason. Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 19:45 EDT
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This story is truly magnificent! I adore the historical details and the description of the Moors. You've really capture the landscape of a great romance! Inu's character is breath taking; I do so love how he has conversed with Kagome. I am anxious to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is really good!!! I like how you have Inuyasha already starting to fall for Kagome!!! Hopefully it will turn into more then lust. Kouga is a bastard!!! Anyway keep up the amazing writing.
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 16:40 EDT
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Oh, another one so soon, that's great! I don't even mind that it's not as long as you usually pit them - it came so close to the other one, that it's a great treat!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice how Inuyasha is already falling for Kagome even though she just came into his life. It may be just lust now,, but if I know you it will develop into love soon enough. I like how you have Kouga a part of Inuyasha's life already and trying to steal it. It is good to see Shippo's introduction to the story too. I can't wait to see where this story goes next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 12:25 EDT
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an attraction... no, not her willfulness and spirit, not that at all. interesting. the loss of power, kouga's history in relation to his. the lengths he goes to to remain anonymous. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 07:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... slowly but surely... inuyasha is quite mysterious... wonder what other reactions kagome will have... who else will she meet... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Desdemona_s_Ghost [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, honestly, I really was drawn into the story. its interesting to see Kouga in such a way, and to place the other characters in such roles. I really enjoyed the style in which you wrote, everything was very rich and descriptive. Please continue making more!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 07:46 EDT
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I'm letting you know because you can't tell by my outward appearance but I am positively dancing in circles and sqealing in delight (my girly romantic side anyway!) From the looks of it you are on your way to pumping out a new masterpiece; I will gladly purchase a VIP ticket & a backstage pass for this ride. Everything was so beautiful I can't correctly describe it. Your writing style, the characters, the plot so far...I love them all. And I'm not sure why (probably because you take such pride & care in what you post) but I know I'm reading a fan fic but I keep forgeting it's not an actual romance novel. Keep it up! Oh yeah, great work on the time period. *proud historical romance reader* It's the little touches that sell it.
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Reviewed By: Josie n the PCats [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is amazing! I am hooked to the screen when I'm reading this story. While I'm disappointed by the short chapters, I know I will anxiously wait for as long as it takes for the next chapter to be released. Great Work!
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: March 14, 2008 18:13 EDT
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I love the formal language Inuyasha's using. I also love the fact that you allow him to be the elder in both manners and thinking. I have always disliked the twisted motherly aspect of Kagome, the one where she thinks she has the right to try to improve or alter Inuyasha's manners. It's too much displayed in the anime at least, so this is a relief. I'll be reading you!
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