| "Under the Sea" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: possibleplatypus On: April 07, 2013 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had a great time reading this. Your characters are hilarious and I love how you fit them into the Little Mermaid. I only wish we had the last chapter ;-; |
Reviewed By: Eerisedda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cute crack!fic! I am sad that there isn't more, and looks like there probably won't be more since it's been two years since an update, but I wanted to comment to let you know that it was highly enjoyable. GaaLee is my OTP, and the Little Mermaid is one of my favourite stories and Disney movies. I like how you put this together. It's adorable and silly. And I like that Lee and Gaara are in character despite it being crack!
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Reviewed By: GaaLeelover On: June 26, 2008 13:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is the most fantisized gaalee story I have ever read. The first chp was a little wierd but once I had gotten to chapter 2 things were starting to come to mind. I was like 'Oh the little mermaid *sweatdrop*. I thought the characters were perfect in their unusal roles of this fic. Only neji can be the nagging crap and choji be the blowfish lol. I love this story (and gaalee) please write soon ^^ XD I want to know what happens with gaara going out to sea looking for his lover lol. 'I won't let him have him...He's MINE!!!!!!' yay ^^
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Reviewed By: Blue Jay On: June 06, 2008 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing, very entertaining. You have to finish this story.... Or elsa!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Emmee On: May 22, 2008 04:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
thanx for the update ^_^ I needed a good laugh!
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Title: just read ch. 3
Reviewed By: Ryuusei Rosuto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 14:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! for once, im glad orochimaru's boy toys were there!
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Title: cant. stop. laughing!
Reviewed By: Ryuusei Rosuto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 14:32 EDT
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[trying hard not to laugh cause im in school] so ill do it in wrighting! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! okay, now that thats out of my system. madness, pure madness! im glad you didnt make it so lee and gaara would hook up (gaara lover, not insane fangirl) but its still funnyer than hell! the statue of gaara in his boxers is just alittle creepy though... oh, and tell kankuro to call me if hes really that desprate to get his bro layed! XD anyway, good story!
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Reviewed By: HamsterBattalionCommander [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic makes me laugh at random times during the day. And I read it like two weeks ago! I wait (im)patiently, perched on the very edge of my seat, for the next chapter.^^
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 05, 2008 20:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really thought I wasent going to like this story because, well hell, it was the little mermaid with Lee and Garra as the main roles, so I dident think a good story could be done. Dude you did it! Totally blew my mind, I couldent stop laughing, love Naruto's music number. I have no clue how you made this story work but you did and it blows my mind. I cant wait for the next chapter,im totally hooked, if you ever make another story like this you'll probibly see me reviewing again. Thanks for tickling my humor bone, count me in for the next chapter, ja ne! XD
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Reviewed By: sez On: March 05, 2008 05:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is fantastic! Normally crack fics leave me cold but this one is pure gold!
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Reviewed By: Emmee On: February 27, 2008 12:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
stupid Orochimaru! *pouts* GO Naruto!*scrolls back to song and sings along* ^_^
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Reviewed By: Emmee On: February 13, 2008 02:15 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hahahaha It's even funnier on medication @.@ no, seriously great stuff, ttly makes my day ^_^
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Reviewed By: Emmee On: February 07, 2008 21:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hahahahahaha *rolf* i love it!
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Reviewed By: KakaIru On: February 07, 2008 00:35 EST
Comment/Review:
Hahahaaha That was so funny!!! I love crack! xDD
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