| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Title: Thoroughly Impressive!
Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage On: April 03, 2009 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Being a B/V fan of olde (well, for 10+ years now) and it's been years since I actually followed an ongoing fic, and it's also been years since I've actually reviewed something. Well, I rarely review fanfics unless they've really REALLY caught my attention, and yours is one of them. I just spent around 3 days (forsaking my research assignments) reading this from first chapter 'til now and I must say, you've got me thoroughly addicted. I could seriously not put this story down. You are an extremely eloquent writer, posessing the vocabulary of an erudite scholar. You ignore the cliches that have become standard characteristics within this genre (veteran B/V fans will know what I refer to xD). What caught my attention the most is how you've explored the 'darker' aspects of Bulma and Vegeta's torrid relationship using vivid imagery to illustrate what dwells deep within their psyches. It's like you made their emotions come alive through their actions. I'm not sure how to describe it exactly as I have a terrible time wording what I think; but I interpreted those chapters with eroticised sado-masochism (that were very cleverly written by the way) as the physical embodiment of their raging emotions: from simple wanton to violent lust and ultimately, a deep love. Haha, that's the hobby-psychoanalyst in me and that probably didn't make sense, and I might going about that all wrong lol xD. Ah well, point is I love it! Anyway, at the risk of this turning into a lengthy rant of praise (it already is), I will conclude by saying: You've renewed my addiction to B/V fanfiction - and I hold this story on par with the 'classics' of the genre, and to actual literature xD. I will now ardently watch this story for updates - and look forward to whatever you have in store for us. You've made a fan out of me! - Cheers, Unholy_Rage
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Reviewed By: kikyo Pyroana Sulane On: April 03, 2009 11:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give u an 1000 rating if i could but i can't unfortunately. This chapter was amazing! Your writing style is impeccable, flawless, and just beautiful. I haven't seen such a perfect description of Bulma and Vegeta's relationship in a looooong time!! I really really really hope you keep this story going, it's developing into a masterpiece (in my humble opinion :) ) The spin you've taken on the three years is perfect, I love it! >_< I just can't get enough of this story!!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 12:37 PDT
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Absolutely gorgeous! I don't care if it's shorter than the others, the power that this one has is fantastic. I can't wait 'til next time. BTW, for some reason the status of this fic says 'completed'. I don't know why but it's a little confusing since it's obviously not.
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Title: you are my private idaho
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 08:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow........ I loooooved this chapter. It was soooo realistic! He loves her! She loves him! Omfg I can't wait to see what happens with them but im wondering about the brother of vegeta where is he?
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Reviewed By: Charm Sahara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 04:55 PDT
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wowow!! you had me addicted after the first couple of sentences! your writing style is so easy to read, that you seem to melt into the story and forget that your reading....
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 22:16 PDT
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im still waiting for the new chapter.....im having withdrawals and a rush of blood to the head.
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Title: Sweeeet!!!
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: March 01, 2009 08:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You always amaze me with your writing style. I didn't know you updated but I will just begin checking the site again regularly. I can't wait to see how Vegeta will handle Bulma from this point on. Hope some twisted punishment will come in the near future. That bathroom scene was off the chain. Please email if you find time ...janellab2k@yahoo.com. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 14:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I mean such sick. My grammer is terrible sometimes.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 14:31 PST
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That was a very interesting chapter. Suck sick minds we have here. LOL! I like it. Great job. Can't wait for the next one.
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Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: Little Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 11:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my dear Lord... after reading that last chapter I am literally shaking. I don't think I have ever read anything like it. If I can be half the talented writer you are, I'll be happy. We are a lot alike you and I, it seemed like you had slipped into my dreams and stolen my most darkest fantasies.
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 06:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm keeping track of this story since you started and I must say your writing style is wonderful. I enjoyed every chapter so far. I'm not into BDSM so I cant really understand what made Bulma so horny in this last chapter but it was still a wonderful read. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 07:17 PST
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Wow, that was dark and sexy and just plain wow. I can't wait for more.
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Title: GEEBUS!
Reviewed By: kirara_sango [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 01:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL! I adore it!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 00:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy fucking shit. i think i just died. came back then threw up lol. wonderful. terribly lush.
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Reviewed By: KurisutiKamae On: February 13, 2009 19:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh mi gosh your story is absolutely addictive and outstanding. I ran across it by accident. I love fanfiction but this is my first dragon ball z fanfiction. Of course I've seen a decent amount of the episodes but never considered getting involved with fanfics for the series. I used to only focus on Yu Yu Hakusho fanfics mainly. But yours inspired me to read other Dragon Ball Z ones and I've found them rather good. Still, yours is the absolute best so far. I apologize for reviewing overall for now. I just couldn't stop in between chapters. However, I will go back, as I reread my favorite parts, and review each individual chapter as every one is praiseworthy. Please update soon, I'm dying to see what happens. Will he kill her? I don't think he would be able to and I really hope he doesn't. I would rather go the 'punishment' route. Nevertheless, I feel bad that he cannot get over his impression of her infidelity. I wish she could somehow prove to him that she only loves him and not Yamcha. Anyways, I check for updates more than I check my e-mail and thats really saying something. Keep up the amazing work.
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