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"Uke" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ]
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 Reviewed By: taity [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 17, 2008 13:44 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
subconsciously, Inu Yasha is reaching out to Sesshoumaru, his mate for comfort, and is withdrawing from the group, who are unable to 'see' the real Inu Yasha. They know something is wrong, but are putting that firmly on the Spider's (I cannot spell his name >
 Reviewed By: Yashas_Sis [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 14, 2008 23:21 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow I almost made my lip bleed I was bitting it so much with worry when Inuyasha was stuck in the barrier with Naraku. It pissed me off so much and I didn't know how I was going to keep reading without crying out "Damnit Inuyasha THAT"S NOT Sesshomaru it's NARAKU!" But they made it before any real physical damage occured. But still... Yashie's really hurt. I don't want Inuyasha to suffer like this. I hope he finds more comfort in Sesshy's presence soom because his body won't beable to take it much longer. Damnit I was going to say something but I just forgot it. Wow. ok anyway. I really love the story and hope you update soon. I'm a little ticked that your takin your time seeing as you wrote the whole thing already but I'll get over it. If you Update! -*stern glare*- jk. But really Kudos on the tale. ~Yasha's Sis
 Title: omigosh
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 14, 2008 10:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
i wish you would update sooner! i fell in love with this story from chapter one and ive been reading it every update!
 Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2008 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
As always, loved it. I really appreciate the way you are letting things come naturally and not one chapter Inu has issues and the next chapter he's lovey dovey. I'm really glad to see this develop into a really wonderful story.
 Title: WoW
Reviewed By: KajiKitsune [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2008 10:12 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is amazing!! I love it! I can't wait for an update! ^_^
 Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 04, 2008 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
XDDDDDDDDDDDDD this is so amazing. I don't know how maytimes im gonna say it, i can't help it!! lol, this story is sooooooooo good! Por Ini and ses =( *pouts*
 Title: daisuki!
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2008 19:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
i love this story i almost cryed!!! when inu got almost raped/ i love it!!!
 Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2008 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I love the sorrow of Inuyasha and the fact that you didn't have him overcoming everything instantly. I also enjoyed the way Sessy got all introspective and realized somethings about himself and the ways he had hurt Inuyasha in the past. Wonderful job and I eagerly await the next one!
 Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2008 19:03 EDT
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i love this story, do you think you could post it faster? i mean right now you're only reposting chapters that were deleted so it's not much work right?
 Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 26, 2008 03:31 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh wow. You deserve every review you get and double, Human. Your characterization is flawless, your scenes are magnetic, your pacing is terrific. I hope you update soon and continue this story. Even though I've never liked m/m and have always gagged at yaoi, I love your story because of the way it grips readers, yanks them in and takes them along for the ride. Everyone's emotions come across clearly and make you feel as they feel without the slightest hitch; I must congratulate you as this is the first story that's ever caused me to empathize with Sesshomaru. That must be difficult. Your visual imagery is well-done; work on your vocabulary as it could be broader. That's the only thing that seems off; the different viewpoints are juggled very well. It is interesting what you choose to have us feel, and how perfectly you can find cliffhanger spots to switch viewpoints. Also, at this point in the story things are getting heavy. You're handling it very well. Most authors would want to come in with some sappyness or a touch of lighthearted comedy, to keep a good balance. You, I notice, have taken Inuyasha's viewpoint (not to mention Sesshomaru's) to the lowest. Thus showing us that extremes are often a great place to be, and that they add unimaginable depth to a character. You're working with Inuyasha especially, I notice. His view and opinions are very rapidly chnaging, and not for the better. You're doing really well with that; he is believable and deep. He's also in pain, and this is written very carefully and with great talent. Flawless. Great work; keep it up! --Kagome
 Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2008 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh.my.god. This story is amazingly amazing that i could read it over and over again and not get tired of it. Not one part of this story has been boring. I feel what they feel; like I'm am there as that person. You are so incredibly talented, and i am so glad to be alive right now, reading your stories. I'm not very religious, but i have this feeling of being incredibly blessed. I love how you capture emotions, and let us feel them. You really are going to do something great in this life, and gain so much. Thank you so much for this ever-growing story, love ya much.
 Reviewed By: Izzanami [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2008 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Really like this story, I was wondering though, I read this of AFF.net, and I notice you have more chapters up there, and have for over a month now, but the updates on here are new every day or so. Have you been revising it, or editing it. I just want to know so if you are revising I can read the new stuff on here.
 Reviewed By: taity [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2008 15:30 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The Inu brothers have been through the mangler too many times. With Naruko nearly raping Inu YAsha, Sesshoumaru needs to re-think his situation with his mate. Inu YAsha is damaged emotionally, and he desperately needs his big brother to stabalise him. Then as his mate, to love and cherish him. Had to smile when 'now' Sesshoumaru smacked-down his younger self!!
 Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2008 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank you for the two chapters! It was angsty but good and I had tears by the time I finished both of them. Can't wait until next post!
 Reviewed By: GodessOfFire [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2008 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
XD!!!!!!!!!!!! wow this story is AH-MAZING!!!! update soon please and i'll definetly keep reading!!!
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