| "Clan of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 15:11 CDT
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*snorts* Sucks to be Gaara. To be honest, I do think Sakura would be better off with him than anyone else. Unless Sai pulls the moron stick out of his ass quick, which would lead to some fun competition. keep writing, if you get me to change my mind, on Gaara, then you've done your job!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 13:42 CDT
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Alternative version is that she falls in love with someone else entirely. Personally, I think Gaara would be kinda interesting myself, he is the strongest, and most defensively protective of her. He also can't identify the emotions he feels towards her as well, and he would protect her, and once she becomes the new queen, he would know to support her, not shield her from everything. That would make more sense, as the Hyuugas, while useful here, are a bunch of giant assholes. Neh. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Nequam_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite a different story, most people who do crossovers usually don't try to go deep but you went a little further than them.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: October 01, 2008 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Now I definitely don't want Sakura to end up with Sasuke! She's better off with Neji! He won't let anyone use her! WHY did you give Sasuke the power of a senshi?! He's way too power hungry and NOt to be trusted! Where's the real Kakashi and Naruto?
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: beauty123088 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how your developing Sakura and Naruto's relationship!!! Awesome chapter!!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Reviewed By: beauty123088 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another totally awesome chapter!!! Hoe you update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: beauty123088 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome yet another good chapter, Keep up the good work!!! Hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: September 05, 2008 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shakes head* While I agree Sasuke cannot be trusted. Danzo is playing a dangerous game! WHAT were everyone thinking letting Sasuke to fall into the darkness?! I doubt he can be trusted with the powers of a senshi! I prefer Itachi! At least he's honest! Plus how do I know for certain Sasuke won't do what Hiashi and Danzo fears-and use Sakura and Naruto for pwoer?!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter
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Reviewed By: beauty123088 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so amazing I've never read anything quite like it before!!! Hope you update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 05:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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