| "Clan of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Reviewed By: beauty123088 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another totally awesome chapter!!! Hoe you update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: beauty123088 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome yet another good chapter, Keep up the good work!!! Hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: September 05, 2008 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shakes head* While I agree Sasuke cannot be trusted. Danzo is playing a dangerous game! WHAT were everyone thinking letting Sasuke to fall into the darkness?! I doubt he can be trusted with the powers of a senshi! I prefer Itachi! At least he's honest! Plus how do I know for certain Sasuke won't do what Hiashi and Danzo fears-and use Sakura and Naruto for pwoer?!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter
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Reviewed By: beauty123088 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so amazing I've never read anything quite like it before!!! Hope you update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 05:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Title: chapter 16
Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 30, 2008 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! the original senshi showed up! So why 10 teen/court? There's only 9 planets...Unless you';re planning on involving the sun or some original planet I've never heard of...Who're the 2 girls Sasuke was with? Not surprising htat ino got slapped, she should have known better than to make fun of Naruto into a senshi's presence! Since they tends to be tad overprotective of the Moon royals...Where's Endymion in this? Did he get reborn? I doubt Serenity would want to wake up and find her soulmate gone...Plus i cannot see him letting his descendants go unprotected much less untrained...You said they are descended from Serenity's kids. Last i checked Endymion married Serenity, meaning he's their ancestor too as well! Naruto-not only looks like Serenity he is a lot like her into personality...But on which side of the family is he descended from Serenity? Paternal or maternal? PLEASE explain! Or do I need to go back and re-read the entire story to find out? And who are the senshi for Naruto and Sakura? I know their names-well 8 of them. But which planets!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great New Chapter YES Hotaru back oh yeah the rest of them there to now!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story! Plz Update it Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great New Chapter
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter
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Title: You Used my idea !:)))
Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT NEW CHAPTER
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