| "A Brother's Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Lovewray [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2017 22:16 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey I loved it I hope kagome goes away like Idk maybe the well
closes up because the powers of the jewel was the only reason it
stayed open, but it's gone now so maybe it time for her to go too,
anyway it shouldn't matter if they're gay or not cause demons don't
care about gender. I still love this please update
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Reviewed By: Mariketa159 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2012 15:57 PST
Comment/Review:
you spelled aniki and otouto wrong |
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why you didn't finish this story. It was truly interesting! And, you where did so well on this chapter, too! Anyway, I wish you would come back too this one. I would love to read what would happen next. B reading U (I hope) BTW...the correct spelling is Aniki and Otoutou or Otouto L8r!
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 13:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
spelling. Aniki (not Anikia), Ototou (not otto), Ningen (not nija). please learn to spell.
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Reviewed By: Kayou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 01:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. Could use a little improvement, but overall not to bad. The spellings are aniki for older brother, and otōto for younger brother. Even though my dictionary does say ani means older brother, I've seen aniki use plenty of times. I have to agree though. Keep Kagome out of it. Especially where Sesshoumaru is concerned. -Shudders- It's a disgusting pairing and an insult to Sesshoumaru when fans pair them together in any way. I do agree that it is amusing it means nothing to Inuyasha, but it would definitely be satisfying to see Sesshoumaru crawling back for more.
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Reviewed By: hitman176339 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 17:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot. Very hot. I was pretty dissatisfied with the ending to the manga...but I was also happy that it's no longer in flux. Rumiko dragged it on for far too long. All Inuyasha fans have left is fanfiction. Inuyasha/Sesshoumaru fics are my favorite. It's always enjoyable to see Inuyasha suddenly thrust into the role of seme. Your fic fulfilled this for me. Sesshoumaru was dominated by Inuyasha. He hated it initially, but began to enjoy the domination. Nothing satisfies fans more. Do I want them to be gay? Not really. I sort of like the idea of Sesshoumaru turning into a total slave to his lust though. I like the idea of Inuyasha enjoying the sex, but it meaning little to him. Sesshoumaru on the other hand...not being able to get enough. Sesshoumaru constantly tracking Inuyasha and begging him for more. I think that would be super hot. I would also prefer to keep Kagome out of the sex. You did an excellent job writing this though. Thanks so much.
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