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"Always" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: BlueCupcakes47  On: August 16, 2020 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I’m absolutely in love with your writing and this series. It has been awhile since this has been updated, can you please add a chapter or two soon. I’m sure others feel the same but we all understand if time slots are difficult. Anyway, I have a question... How is Umbridge reacting to the closeness of Harry and Peter? Is she trying to stop them and keep the houses apart or does she ignore them?
 Reviewed By: laughing tru the night  On: August 26, 2008 04:16 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hi! i read this fic and your other fic and i have totally fallen in love with the story, cuz Its freakin awesome! also does malfoy become friends will all of them and make a slytherin alliance through peter or something? please update again! =) ps i didnt rate the spelling and grammer cuz thing i honestly didnt notice, heh heh!
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2008 19:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
HMmm, interesting. Two things though. First, ROn will turn things around, but it won't be easy for him. On top of that, gaining parselmouth abilities has one universal rule, all magic at it's most primal relies on permission. A gift of magic, given freely, has few if any side effects. If Harry had willingly given his blood to voldemort, without any coersion, his original appearance would be achieved, and the gifts would be enormous. THe same goes for learning a language from a magical creature. The power to speak to snakes came from a greek legend, for a legendary healer who gave full burial rites to a snake, in exchange, the snakes children cleaned the man's ears, and granted him the ability to speak to at least snakes, if not all animals. Point to all of this? A gift granted freely is powerful, and has few side effects if also taken freely, no strings attached, same as how Harry learned to speak with the fairies of Neverland. Interesting idea? Neh, might be something to include in the book Umbitch requires the students to read. Neh. COntinue to update though, will ya? Ja ne.


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