| "Training Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 17:10 CDT
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Gah! It's got like 10 reviews and only 2 chapters!@ That's more then I usually get for 4 chapters! And you think it's doing bad? Good lord. You've got some serious attention problems I swear to god!
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Reviewed By: Antwangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 02:47 CDT
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ayie! it's so cute ! i mean to tell you the truth im not that into the olympics but i can tell this is going to be one hell of a story just like White Rose. You're such an awesome writer. Keep on keeping on. ;)
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 19:05 CDT
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This is really a cute yet realistic story! Do your best, although it sounds like you are, since this is such an original sounding story and so completely wonderful. You seriously are a wonderful author! Sounds great, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 17:18 CDT
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i finally remembered what this reminded me of. the toe-pick movie, 'the cutting edge'. it's always been one of my favorites
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I really loved this chapter! The interaction between them is really cute. I'd love to see where you take this fic, so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! this reminds me of my best friend... she used to practice rhythmic gymnastics, oh I miss her so bad... anyways, great work with this story... I'll keep on reading it! =)
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
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It looks like this will be a good story! One thing though is that men don't compete on uneven bars. They have parallel bars, high bar, pommel, floor, vault and rings.
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 22:43 CDT
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ome...Beautiful. Just like White Rose. You have a nice style of writing and this i can tell is going to be an AWESOME story. So update soon!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: gothicgirlinlove [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really good fanfic. well i would say i hope you update which i know your going too.
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Reviewed By: Katya Izmir On: August 11, 2008 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this, I hope to be reading more soon. In fact I like your writing style a lot and I noticed that you've written something else so.... with great anticipation, I'm gonna tackle!!!!! ^_^ Katya
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 17:33 CDT
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i like the originality of this story. the characters seem to have the edge needed to be olympic contenders. the single minded focus on their event is evident. i do like the persona that you gave to kagome. she has more fire and self-confidence than most authors give her. will it be just the three of them, or will the other be involved? i would love to see sango in olympic competition. i think this it the start of a great story.
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