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| "Electric Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Erava On: July 17, 2009 15:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
O_o Wow. Nice. I find it unlikely that Larxene would have nothing underneath her cloak, what with all the high kicks she does. Someone would see something. Very cool though ^ - ^
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay, deep breath, tomorrow is teh hole-y dai of AkuRoku! If you can make it through tonight, you can make it through anything!! Tomorrow is the goal, the last 1-shot, filled with crazy-insane-beautiful-smutt! . . . . Or a new chapter for sacrifice, just to confuse everybody, and make people like me laugh our asses off as we come to the erroneous conclusion that this was all one big add campaign for your story, in that the AkuRoku-shot is a one-line 'story' that says, "Go herez" with a link to teh smutt chappie . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Of course I'm completely insane, and you would probably be killed for that. So I'll just go read now. XD . . . . Wow . . . . wowowowowowowwoww. . . . . 1st line is killer . . . . 2nd line is a mind fuck if taken literally, and zomg-My Eyes! If taken figuratively . . . . O.O;; . . . Whoot. The goddess unbound, and someone else learned the meaning of what she read . . . . . Nnnnnnnn . . . Larxene/Sora, scary. It hurts more because of what she did to the Repliku in the manga . . . so bad, hell she WOULD have done things to it, given the fact that they were going to wipe it's memory . . . . . Is still good. This was still wonderful, I understand why you would feel dirty, but . . . your were honest about Larxene, and about Axel, but was see that more often so . . . be proud that her savagery rang true. . . . .
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