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Reviewed By: Ruka__ On: December 05, 2008 19:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you soo much for posting this story, and even posting the Interlude after the main story. I loved them both. I have fallen in love with your writing. Hope to hear from you, better yet .. i hope to see a new story.
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Reviewed By: madjax36 On: October 31, 2008 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, before I get boulderdashed with more work, I just wanted to drop a line and praise your work on this piece. I've read your reviews, besides your "one shot" and am marveled over your composition. Frankly, I agree with you, the first chapter is a stand alone. The second chapter I thought was a well thought out transition that can lead into a larger story,because it definately has that capacity, or something more along the lines as short stories that interweave the various characters in a larger plot. Well, its' your story, but I can't help but want to see you mimic the 1st arc's premise of the history project, but played out in a modern fable of the same thing. (If that makes any sense.) Then again, if you add too much its like giving the milk away for free. Meaning, that the poor reader will be bored because you leave nothing to the imagination. Well, something like that. Anyway, I'm placing your section on my favorites list in anticipation of your next arc in this storyline. My only real const crit, if you're serious about furthering this storyline, because we all rave about it, then make certain that the characters have something other than a one-night stand. (Of course, now I want to find the reference section of our Public Library and get it on with my honey. That was hot, btw.) I know I'm speaking obvious when I write this, and knowing that the true genius is not to write PWP, but a tasty lemon with a nice zinger. You got the lemon and zinger and... Here's a question, what will make Kagome decide to change her personna and really, why would she? Inuyasha's character is easy to follow - beautifully so - although, that same type of questioning applies to him as well. So what to do with Kags and what was she crying for at her prom? If you have answers for that, then I get to read your next installament when? Anyway, thanks for allowing a little old lurker speak her piece. But, before I go, I just want to emphasis that your storyline is brilliant executed and I whole heartedly agree, the 1st chapter stands alone. Bouquets and gold stars for today. Have a Happy Halloween. Madjax36
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 16:34 EDT
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Wonderful! Enthralling. More please! Have them confess their feelings...please....
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 18:13 EDT
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this was an amazing one shot, and an amazing continuation. the silent yearning of both chapters begs for the story to be continued. the confusion and angst of growing into adulthood were captured to perfection. i love your writing, and i love this story.
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 09:10 EDT
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i love it! please continue! i beg you! it shouldn't end here! T^T i'm begging you, on my knees!
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Title: OMGNESS
Reviewed By: sherii-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE THIS AMAZING U BETTER UPDATE, DUDE I LOVE IT....LIKE OMG AMAZING
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Title: OMFG!!!
Reviewed By: savagegenius92 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 21:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfic! very origional...kinda prefer a little more lemony, however this is one of my major favorites! i just don't understand in chapter 1, how come no body heard them doing anything? and how big were these tables? @-@....anyway! i loooooove it! i brag about your work to my fellow fanfic crazies! keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one shots... really liked them... will you continue still or end here... good job though... great work...
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: September 17, 2008 11:38 EDT
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That is so going to tide me over till the sequel. Inuyasha was so sweet in a gruff kind of way.
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Reviewed By: My-Only-Love (not logged in) On: September 17, 2008 02:11 EDT
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So that's InuYasha's side. I wonder how things will turn out. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG.....you are not going to leave us hanging are you???? Please, please, please, please (and did I say please??) continue this!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe.. me likey.. me likey:D:D:D Please Purrttyyy Please keep writing! I love the story:D:D
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 16:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! You tease! Now we'll keep wanting more and more :P Seriously...if you get the time you should make this into a multi-chap. While both parts stand well alone the storyline is open to SO many possibilities and could be spanned out a few chapters with those amazing writing skills of yours. But if you just do a sequel that's fine, too. I can't wait to check it out! So keep writing! :D ~Amber
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Reviewed By: IC On: September 15, 2008 18:48 EDT
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That was awsome. I really liked the plot and the tenderness. You should totally do a part 2.
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Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: September 15, 2008 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have GOT(!!!) to make this into a full blown story. I'm on my knees and begging here! This is FANTASTIC!!! What a story this could be! Don't just leave it here. Get rid of Hojo and bring these two star-crossed lovers together. PLEASE!!!!!
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