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| "Memories of Pleasure and Shame" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: Beautifully
Reviewed By: MaDDeRHaTT3R [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2017 20:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was thrilling, captivating, enthralling, and had me
wanting more after every chapter! It is a page turner and very
wonderfully CREATIVE! The only thing I saw that bothered me
slightly was how much the author allowed herself to be affected by
"nit pickers" that didn't seem to TRULY enjoy the story for all
that it is. They seemed like gripers to me.. (people who like to
complain) or possibly even haters. (people JEALOUS of what other
people have esp. When they LACK the very thing they covet. I felt
bad for the writer. I am an empath. So after particularly harsh
commenting I could feel her hesitation in how she proceeded. It
didn't last a long time, but it did effect her confidence if only
for a hort time. I am PROUD of her for hanging in there and
essentially "flipping off" the gripers, haters, and the flamers.
WhooooHoooo!!! "Eat a DICK BITCHEZ!!" Don't give them the
satisfaction of ever letting them see you sweat writer! You are
GOOD!! You have TALENT. Much respect, ThE HaTTeR
| Reviewed By: MaroonWolf18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2009 12:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the first chapter. I will get to the others as soon as I can. I love your writing style... how bold and flashy, in yet deep it can be... Your descriptions file into the mind, that of watching an actual episode on television. Very nice. I, too, am writing an InuYasha FanFic. It is not Yaoi, but it is rated for no one under the age of 17 years old. Email me when you get the chance. I'd like to talk to you about a few things considering your storyline and what not. FangBarer17@Yahoo.Com is my most often checked Email on the daily basis, several times a day. Can't wait to hear from you! Please keep up the great work! Take Care!! --Amanda/MaroonWolf18 -- FangBarer17@Yahoo.Com
| Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2009 09:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an okay chapter. Your previous ones were much better though. You just kinda rushed through this one. I'd honestly rather wait two months for an update, if that's what it takes to keep your writing smooth and consistent.
| Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fairly well written. The only real issue I have is that you're using 'thie' instead of thigh. Other than that, I really like this. I'm glad you're continuing this fic.
| Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 09:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were little problems here and there, but by the time you noticed it you were already past it so it didn't matter. They were getting along just fine, but how will Kagome react to this little get together. Of course she's going to think that he was with Kikyo. Please tell me that Inuyasha will let Sesshoumaru jack her up just one good time.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2009 10:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
That was so sad. Poor Sesshoumaru. From reading the manga, I can tell you that he does have feelings. When Rin first died, it was obvious that he was sad, and he was crushed the second time. Kagura's death affected him greatly. When he learned that his father had never intended him to keep either sword, beneath his anger, he was feeling rejected. He only wanted to make his father proud. So, his having those feelings aren't outlandish at all. For Sesshoumaru to have forsaken seeking out what he wanted, he had to be profoundly affected by Inuyasha's rejection. Sesshoumaru doesn't give up for no reason. Wonderful chapter and I'm anxious for the next.
| Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 09:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ok are they going to get together or will their relationship just get more perverse?
| Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 09:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story. The way you portray Sesshoumaru as having helped Inuyasha when he was young and on his own was very poignant. You are doing first person rather well and that's very difficult to do. Kudos! I'm off to read the next chapter. ^_^ Snow
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